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08.05.06

[letter #10]

To the Oh-so-Humble Man Who Waves Newspaper from the Bridge:

Newspaper? Indeed, that must be something.

Well, I'll reply in order. If not, I'll confuse myself and leave too many things missing. Now, let's see.

Ah, the coffee stain. I suppose it makes a lot of sense. I would hate to have to pick up something that's touched the bottom of everyone's shoe, or at least, touched what's been on the bottom of everyone's foot. There'd probably be more than mud.

You seem to have the common conception formed by everyone else about news forecasters. I would agree with you, but I'm too lazy to make my own incorrect predictions and shall thus pretend to be on the good side of the forecasters. I suppose I could always predict the complete opposite of the forecast. Then I'd get sixty percent right rather than just forty. A twenty percent difference.

There was no need to ask about my health, although it makes me feel very well cared for. I'm perfectly fine. Not even a running nose or a cough. It did feel so very cozy to snuggle into bed after, though.

I shall make certain to look for a waving newspaper from the bridge if the sky decides to rain tomorrow. It will humor me greatly, to only see your arm and a newspaper. But we all try to stay as dry as possible, don't we? Showers don't usually go well with clothes.

I'm trying to enjoy the weather while it lasts. I have a small garden on my balcony, and I love to tend to it. I am such a horrid gardener, though. I feel rather sorry for my plants, because while I buy them and shower them with love, they seem to live such short lives. Maybe I shall go to the bookstore and find a few books to buy. Or those small outdoor booksales, maybe. I can stand there and choose a few books, then take my time reading them outside before I return home. In fact, I think I'll do it this weekend.

Well, the bed calls to me yet again. I am reminded that I have a particular chocolate muffin waiting for me, wrapped in a silver bow. Do you happen to know where it came from?

Yours Truly,

The Oh-so-Spoiled Woman that can Never Resist Her Bed


[author's notes]

Gah! No time for author's notes! Must go and fold the laundry. I think I might get to go clothes shopping too, taking advantage of back to school sales and all. Pft.

Back from shopping. Bought one green long sleeve shirt with a hood (those are so very rare now...I feel like I'm trying to dress to be a prude or something. Is it a sin to cover your arms?) and two shirts to layer under it, one which has pink and brown stars on a creamy background and the other with blue and green hearts on a creamy background as well. And a small tan jacket.

Thanks to yunsi for correcting my errors!!! <333 I need to proofread these things. At least I had an excuse this time. She'll have to become my official beta sooner or later.

But then, you're one of the only people who reads this, though. Ah well.


Snow


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  • User Comments: [5]
    ^^^
    "Man That Waves"?

    I'd prefer "who" but I think that's a stylistic choice. rolleyes

    "There'd probably be more than mud." rofl

    Concerned about the sentence before that though. O_o Is it singular or plural? (Or more importantly, does it matter??? xd )

    "Then I'd get sixty percent right rather than just forty. A twenty percent difference." whee

    I don't like "cared for". Me no know why. Just plain don't!!! I've been turning very belligerent lately. stare

    "snuggle into bed after" is ending the sentence on a preposition. *sounds it out* Me thinks that's the right spelling.

    "to only see that"? "I love the tend to it"?

    "they seem to live such short lives" That's me!!!!! blaugh

    Awww.. that's so sweet!!! heart
    ^^^

    comment yunsi · Community Member · Sat Aug 05, 2006 @ 08:52pm

    -[[Take a little bit of time everyday to reflect on bits and pieces of life. Relax and view life to its max.]]-

    *runs away screaming from all of her horrid typos*

    [[SnowPheonix <3]]-


    comment SnowPheonix · Community Member · Sat Aug 05, 2006 @ 09:53pm
    Omg, yuns. I just have this one thought to say. I came in here, randomly reading Snow's comment, which immediately made me read yours. And that made me just HAVE to say stuff.

    Wait. Rather, let me say it like this. If Snow has actually asked you to nitpick her writings like that, scratch what I've written - I have nothing to say at all.

    But if she hasn't - yunsi, I think you seriously have to stop that then. You're driving ME nuts with all your nitpickings that I see EVERYWHERE. Doing it once in a while is fine, and esp. if it's meant to be funny - but you're not doing that. You're just pointing out stuff that I feel really doesn't need to be made into a whole crazy list of wittle things you disliked. In my eyes ( I read Snow's entry for once), I think it's fine just the way it is. It's not like she's trying to submit it in for the Newberry Honor or something, and really, no one could care less whether a sentence is singular or PLURAL. OMFG. You have just got to stop it. Could you be more creative for ONCE and actually write something in your posts/comments/whatever other than wrong things you have noticed about people or who stole NERFE from you?? YEAH! That's another thing! DDDx GoD!! It was all just a stupid thing Sar made up LONG ago, and even she now is thinking that you have just got to STOP taking it so seriously everywhere and going on and ON about it...... It's awfully old, and REALLY dry of humor. Please stop. x.x


    comment ~Adriel Everin~ · Community Member · Sun Aug 06, 2006 @ 10:03am
    ^^^
    Snow: As Adri pointed out quite clearly, those are "wittle" things. ^^ Please don't run away!!!

    Adri: Well, Snow didn't actually ask me to nitpick her writing, but whenever I do so, she always thanks me and goes to edit, so I ASSUME it's ok. As for the other things, I've already apologized to Sarual about nitpicking. Typos bother me, esp. if I make them, but I realize other people don't care as much (or at all).

    Nerfe? Haha..oh yeah. mmmm... eek Wow, I never took it seriously Adri. Ummm... sweatdrop I don't think I've posted about that in a while. xp
    ^^^

    comment yunsi · Community Member · Wed Aug 09, 2006 @ 07:42pm

    -[[Take a little bit of time everyday to reflect on bits and pieces of life. Relax and view life to its max.]]-

    OMFG.

    [[SnowPheonix <3]]-


    comment SnowPheonix · Community Member · Wed Aug 09, 2006 @ 08:44pm
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