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Swisssshhh...

Lap...lap.

Swisshhh...

Patter-patter.

Swisssshhhh--

SPLASH.


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Fresh water? o.o Someone say fresh water?

Glub-glub-gurgle-cough-splutter-gulp.

I blink, wiping my face off with a grimy sleeve as I stare into the small pond of fresh water. All of us are leaning over it, having taken hasty gulps to fill our mouths. Ripples and bubbles of sand litter the once clean water...but no one seems to mind.

Nerfe wipes off his mouth. "Okay, where next?"

"Home, that's where!" Yunsi cheers.

"Erm...ha ha, but where's home, exactly?" Fae points out.

"Um...there," says Sar.

"No, there." C: I chime in, pointing two degrees south (or maybe north...who knows?) of her outstretched finger.

"Uh-uh, it's here." Adri squints between us and points right down the middle.

"Bah, you guys don't have a home. I do. And now, it's here." Des flops on the sand, enjoying the glaring sun from behind his light-protective glasses.

Lucky blighter.

"Maybe that's your home, but it's not mine, that's for sure." YYugi joins us on the search.

Chibi-bunni chirps in. "Sorry, I'd help, but I've never been to your home." =S

"Well, I can tell you...it's that way!"

"It doesn't matter which way, anyway. We kinda have to build a boat to sail across this big salty drink."

"Ohhh~ Yeah, let's make one!"

"There's so much wood! We could make an uber-ginormous one." o.o

"Last one to grab one of these over-sized splinters is a rotten orange! Yah!"

----- 3 hours later -----

"Ugh." Tug...tug...tug...

"Snow, you're walking in zigitty-zagitties..."

"Huh?"

I look behind me. Sure enough, the piece of wood I've been trailing along has etched a pretty line behind me.

A pretty crooked line.

"Shut-up," I mutter, yanking the wood out of a particularly stubborn hole of sand. I hiss as another splinter works its way into my hand. Lovely.

"When do you think we'll finish this ship?" Adri asks conversationally.

"You call that a ship?" I raise an eyebrow at the hulking mass of wood before us. So far, all we've managed is a pile. As big as the pile may be, in no way is that going to keep even a pin afloat.

"Okay, then, that raft."

"Raft?"

"Pile, whatever. All the same thing, anyway."

We deposit our contributions, standing alongside the rest of the weary workers. All of our faces are red and sunburnt in some shape or form, like the way the sky looks right now as the sun sets.

"Dude, we're nevvvveeeerrrrrr gonna get this done."

"What a smart observation. We only came up with that 3 hours ago."

"We should find another way to get back home."

"What if we just stayed here?"

It's silent as we all contemplate the idea. Why not? Scorching sands, the teeniest puddle of fresh water, burning sunlight, dead trees...

"Nah," we all chorus.

I pick at the splinters in my hand, thinking a bit. What to do...what to do...

"What if we used all of our items and tied them together into a floaty?" =D

"My OMFG!"

"My seal slippers!"

"My ORLY? hat!"

"My winged sandals!"

"My guitar of angellus!"

"Okay! Let's do it!"

We all collectively glare at Sar, who smiles quailingly. "We could swim..."

"Nah. I go for option A."

Suddenly, half of us are stripping off items, leaving them strewn on the sand. Necklaces, shoes, glasses, headgear, pants, shirts, and other accesories dot the shore, when suddenly, something sucks them up from the sand underneath us.

SHLUPTTT!!!

"Huh?"

"My stuff's gonnnneeee~" someone wails.

"Where'd it go?"

"It disappeared! Magic!" =o

"Whoaa...do it again!" C:

Clink. Clunk.

SHLUPT.

"Stoppit! We shouldn't give the sand god anymore stuff!"

"Sand god?"

"Well, er..."

SHHHLLLLLUUUUPPPPTTTT.

Suddenly, the ground everywhere is being sucked in. Sand is flying everywhere as our legs flail for solid ground, hoping not to get caught in the whirling vacuums at our feet.

"Eek!"

"ACK!"

"Guh." x.o

"RUN!!!"

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Author's Notes:

I updated. o.x -ish shot-

What do you think the sand god is? =o It's after your items...beware! >D

Okay, anyway...erm, yeah. I'm kinda at a loss. u___________u

Plot ideas, people! =D Gimme gimme! <3


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  • User Comments: [10]
    Nuuuuuuuuuuuu my items!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -wails-


    LAWL I like where this seems to be going. You're so cool, Snow. -squeezes- yayayayayay!!! <333


    comment ~Adriel Everin~ · Community Member · Sun Jan 28, 2007 @ 11:55pm
    ^^^
    Chibi-bunni chirps in. "Sorry, I'd help, but I've never been to your home." =S
    rofl

    the piece of wood I've been trailing along has etched a pretty line behind me

    Awwww...

    I hiss as another splinter works its way into my hand

    eek Poor Snow...'

    All of our faces are red and sunburnt in some shape or form

    Red! Prettiful! heart

    We all collectively glare at Sar, who smiles quailingly. "We could swim..."
    blaugh

    I love the plot so far too. ^^ We should get sucked into the Sand God's kingdom and come out fabulously rich after many trials (like TCOMC) and rescuing Cedric, who it turns out didn't die and is merely trapped in a maze 'neath the ground.
    ^^^

    comment yunsi · Community Member · Mon Jan 29, 2007 @ 06:48pm
    LMFAO! Not bad. I wonder who COULD be down there. Maybe it was simply a pit that seals itself up after something falls in?

    comment YYugi54 · Community Member · Tue Jan 30, 2007 @ 09:45pm
    TCOMC? -frowns- I'm lost. Dx

    Cedric? HARRY POTTER?!?! -ish dizzy-


    comment ~Adriel Everin~ · Community Member · Wed Jan 31, 2007 @ 05:04am
    I'm guessing I'm the one who offered the ORLY? Hat. That's the only item I have from all those offer of items. This one is a bit weird. This reminds me about the Gift of Goddess item. We can just make an a house out of the wood and make furniture! And then we can build a big boat and put the house on top of it. Wait, I forgot about the sand thing -_-

    comment Chibi-Bunni · Community Member · Wed Jan 31, 2007 @ 01:47pm
    • ---------- <333


    . . Oh, lotsa comments. C:

    @Adri: The Counte of Monte Cristo. xP
    I'm glad I managed to please you...that's what I live to do. C: Not. *tries to pry off squeezing arms*

    @yunsi: o.o Only you'd think the red of our sunburnt faces were pretty. Dx
    Your plot's rather wild. Cedric? O.O I don't like fanfiction of him. :C But, ha ha, I like the part about TCOMC, tho. I'd have a reason to be rereading it. xD New relocation of LO!!!

    @YYugi: If it was simply a pit, what would I write about? :C Trying to get out?

    @Chibi-bunni: Right you are! =D The ORLY hat is yours.
    It's okay. C: I was thinking of a giant boat too, but then I got a bit more realistic and realized a boat wasn't going to come out of our labors quite so quickly. xD

    I've already got an idea about the sand pits. C: I like yunsi's idea, though, and so I believe I shall incorporate it, if I can. Thank you for all the suggestions and comments, everyone! <333


    s n o w


    comment SnowPheonix · Community Member · Fri Feb 02, 2007 @ 12:34am
    But you guys were really talking about Cedric Diggory??! O.O Lolok. O:


    New relocation of LO?! .... :0


    comment ~Adriel Everin~ · Community Member · Fri Feb 02, 2007 @ 06:46am
    A fool plays with my heartstrings...

    • =
    ---------- <333


      . . Yunsi gave me another good idea in Chinese class today when we were supposed to be doing last minute cramming for finals.

      What was it again? *panics*

      Something about...mud and marshes? Underground...OMG I forgot.

      Ah ha! Nevermind. Stuff about the sand gods. There will be some character bashing. C:

      Lolok? xDDD

      No, no relocation of LO. That'd defeat the purpose. u_________u


    s n o w

    ...realeasing an eternal harmony in the chamber of my soul.


    comment SnowPheonix · Community Member · Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 08:38pm
    Yes....! Charrie bashing!!! <3


    I agree. That's why I was like, "new relocation?! O:" when you wrote, "new relocation!" xD


    comment ~Adriel Everin~ · Community Member · Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 10:17pm
    adri
    Yes....! Charrie bashing!!! <3


    A fool plays with my heartstrings...

    • =
    ---------- <333


      . . Oh, adri, how you'll wish you never said that. xDDDD


    s n o w

    ...realeasing an eternal harmony in the chamber of my soul.


    comment SnowPheonix · Community Member · Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 12:45am
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