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U n d e r C o n s t r u c t i o n ! ! !
07.29.06

[letter #4]

To My Clumsy Spy:

Your story was very amusing. I did see you, as you guessed, and was rather disappointed that you didn't decide to wear the hat. However, your acknowledgement of me did make up for it.

I didn't ever think that you would come up with such an idea to spy at me behind a hat. I do believe I would still have recognized you, wide brim straw hat or no. Perhaps you're not clumsy, it may have been horrible luck that ruined the moment. That usually accounts for clumsiness, you know.

It did surprise me that you managed to catch a glimpse of me. It never crossed my mind that you could even see my back. I never really thought much of hiding until you mentioned that you couldn't see me, you know. I have now lost half of my intrigue. Hopefully, my face and my voice will still remain a mystery.

But while you can't guess what I sound like, I've come up with a voice for you. It's happy and lilting...bubbly and smiley, if that could describe a person's voice rather than their personality. If you were on this bridge right now, with the daily market surrounding you, your laugh would probably tinkle, then float.

I sound like a hopeless romantic. I do believe that if I seal this letter away now, I still have time to deliver this and come back to see you pass by.

Good night!

Your Not-Quite-So Mysterious Figure on the Bridge


[Re: letter #4]

To My Still Intriguing Figure on the Bridge:

I couldn't help but reply to your name that you made for yourself. While you aren't a silhouette, you are still just as mysterious as you ever were. It brings up still more questions. It's as if for every answer I get, I have to make at least two more questions.

I don't know which is a worse case: horrible luck or clumsiness. But neither will keep me from being clumsy, will it?

The way you describe my voice makes me sigh so wistfully. Indeed, you are a hopeless romantic. I'm much quieter and shy than that. It just seems that with pen and paper, it's easier to talk.

Oh! I forgot! Enclosed is one of my hairpins that flew away. A small...gift, of sorts.

It's late, I really should get to bed. Please forgive my short reply. Good night!

Awaiting your reply,

Your Lady With Red Hair


[author's notes]

Erm...I don't have anything to say. o.o Really.

Rampage: Squeak! ^^


Snow


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  • User Comments: [3]
    ^^^
    MUAHAHAHA!!!! I WILL NITPICK YOUR WORK UNTIL YOU BEG FOR MERCY!!!!

    *searches in vain for errors*

    "What? NO! This can't be!!! There ain't none!!!!"

    "But what is this I see? Ah-ha!"

    "I'm much quieter and shy than that."

    ((Actually, I have no clue if that was grammatically correct or not. (And even if it wasn't, I wouldn't have any idea how to fix it.) ninja But I just had to put something, right? mrgreen Otherwise I'd be the "hopeless romantic" instead, with nothing more original/interesting to write than wild enthusiasm for this adorable fluff!!!))
    ^^^

    comment yunsi · Community Member · Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 05:17am

    -[[Take a little bit of time everyday to reflect on bits and pieces of life. Relax and view life to its max.]]-

    I suppose I can't improve, or you won't come back in to read my fluff. xDDD
    I guess the word should be 'shier' or 'more shy', which ever of the two it is. *shrugs*


    [[SnowPheonix <3]]-


    comment SnowPheonix · Community Member · Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 11:06pm
    ^^^
    *sigh* I considered that...but they both sounded awkward. scream

    Don't worry, Snow. ^^ I love your writing too much for me to stop just b/c there aren't any errors!!! (Doesn't that sound weird?)
    ^^^

    comment yunsi · Community Member · Mon Jul 31, 2006 @ 01:43am
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