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Richard's life *NOW 20% MORE INSIDE MY HEAD!*
Anything that you have honestly wanted to know about me, you'll find it here. What i'm going through, as well as poems, and how my week has gone, etc etc.
The Life of Death
Cries could be heard from the room above,
“It’s a boy”, the doctor tells the mother.
Tears could be seen below,
“She didn’t make it”, says the surgeon.
As the smiles and tears mix together,
We praise the Life of Death.

Shouts of “Amen” in a small church,
Smiles overpowering sadness.
Heads lowered in the cemetery,
mourning the loss of his lover.
As the smiles and tears mix together,
We praise the Life of Death.

Skies, blue beyond the eyes,
secretly tainted by darkness.
Sunlight, beaming with energy,
dulled by the faint glow of the Moon.
As the light and darkness mix together,
We praise the Life of Death.

I look up into the eyes of my life,
and choose my own fate.
I close my eyes in the darkness,
and try to resist its deathly grip.
As my eyes open and close together,
I praise the Life of Death.


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  • User Comments: [15]
    Thats actually.....pretty damned good. Keep up the good work, man

    comment InuyashaFan2501 · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 01:05am
    I heart how it sounds just like i heart pretty much everything you wirte i love well hope to talk to you soon.

    comment sweetiewithwings · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 01:43am
    "It's good, but it made me sad."

    comment Sora~no~Yami · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 12:47pm
    eek Impressive!! Seriously, it's really cool, and it sounds professional. I don't know if I quite understand the last stanza of the poem, but I've never been that great at understanding poetry. Sad, but I do love the poem. 3nodding

    comment katsoyu · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 06:44pm
    i love your poem. it is deep. and it touches the heart1 heart

    comment pyrtes · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 07:25pm
    Its very well done, I like it.
    Makes you feel sad.
    Great job Richy : D


    comment [ Blackrose ] · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 07:25pm
    blaugh another wonderful poem master, I like it ^^ it's very very good 4laugh *pokes* lol my poetic master^o^ cool, another poem to add to the amazing collection 3nodding

    comment Gone1325 · Community Member · Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 08:36pm
    Wow~! that is so........wow......very touching.

    comment Report Banner Al · Community Member · Sat Apr 14, 2007 @ 01:57am
    WOW! Well done Richy-Kun,
    It's very well made, very poetic,
    Good job 3nodding
    It's an interesting topic too...

    comment Perogogo · Community Member · Fri Apr 20, 2007 @ 02:52am
    Hai!
    Wooo nice!

    Do i get a cookie?

    comment [[Pandie]] · Community Member · Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 01:28pm
    Interesting... Contradictory. Slightly confusing, but I like it.

    comment Black Amaranth · Community Member · Sat May 05, 2007 @ 01:19am
    That's a nice blend there.Darkness to light.Life to death.It's like the cycle of everything. I love it. ( :

    comment Moonlight2Dawn · Community Member · Wed May 16, 2007 @ 11:16pm
    Has to be the best so far love.
    That's touching, made me cry.
    I've had enough crying damnit.
    x.x

    comment Underscare · Community Member · Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 07:13am
    Thats sooo good!! Ur an awsome poet!

    comment WinterRose0692 · Community Member · Sun Dec 02, 2007 @ 05:06am
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