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Richard's life *NOW 20% MORE INSIDE MY HEAD!*
Anything that you have honestly wanted to know about me, you'll find it here. What i'm going through, as well as poems, and how my week has gone, etc etc.
Minute after Minute, Day after Day
As I sat in the darkness,
the Mighty Orchestra played.
they played minute after minute,
day after day, while I sat in silence.
As the Orchestra played,
I watched the fire in their eyes grow bigger
Minute after minute, day after day,
untill it engulfed their weak souls.
As I sat in my chair gazing at the orchestra,
the smell of burning dreams filling my nostrils,
I remebered my own dreams,
the ones I made for Her, my only beloved. (((((** see editor's note))))))
Slowly, I arose from my nightmarish slumber,
and looked around, noticing the orchestra,
their souls completely engulfed in flames.
I tried to escape the horrid stench,
but I was shackled to their life,
and forced to watch the orchestra get up.
Slowly, they began to drench my soul
in their hidious passion.
Then with a demonic grin on their faces,
they set my soul ablaze and watched as
Minute after minute, day after day,
I suffered the same fate that they had.






Editor's note: When talking about the world, I used "My only beloved" to represent hat we care deeply about in each of our lives, wether it be an object such as a picture or rose, an aspect such as life or death, or even a person such as your mom or husband/wife.


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  • User Comments: [14]
    crying idk what happen to my first comment but i guess i'll do it again for you shijin =^-^= i love this poem xD i'm going to add it to my favorites 3nodding i love how you keep saying the title of the song and it moves with the poem in a pattern umm...i'll show my favorite line crying i dont remeber >.< i'll just tell you later shijin but me loved the poem very much hehe luv you shijin <3<3<3

    comment Gone1325 · Community Member · Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 07:33am
    *ish jealous*
    O:
    Awesome as always ;D
    Keep writing more and more and more and more and more and more and.....you know what I'm going to say XD

    comment Mercedes · Community Member · Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 10:43pm
    That was different, it caught my eye. It made me want to cry and restart life, living in a nightmare, it's kind of something, that has a deep meaning to it, and relates to quite a lot of people. Just need to find it. Depressing, but satisfying.
    Amazing Richy, you never cease to amaze me.
    ^^

    comment Underscare · Community Member · Sun Jul 15, 2007 @ 03:04pm
    *Shivers* Its really creepy if you think about it long enough. We let so many things control our lives that we forget to live and sometimes we are forced to watch what we have gotten ourselves into or a loved one.

    comment Little Angel Of Light! · Community Member · Sun Jul 15, 2007 @ 10:37pm
    THIS WAS ******** AWESOME!!! GOOD JOB!!!!!

    comment xXJessi_ScreamXx · Community Member · Wed Jul 18, 2007 @ 12:52am
    OMG! Rich! i like it, a lot. but who is this girl, chu are talkin about, huh huh. tell me ily Rich

    comment ScHmIdTyScHmIdT · Community Member · Wed Jul 18, 2007 @ 12:54am
    *nods* very moving...
    *not good at comenting*
    It's good ^_^

    comment Shinys · Community Member · Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 10:58pm
    omg you have such talent!

    comment MegurinelxLuka · Community Member · Sun Jul 29, 2007 @ 07:39pm
    We only fear what we do not understand && Those who have true knowledge know that we know absolutely nothing.

    |»Nicolé«|

    »|»

    This is my favourite.
    C:


    This world is one full of heart break; and one of love.


    comment N i co l e · Community Member · Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 12:10am
    That's an interesting way to look at things Richy. I like it. I do I do.

    comment Zoie Chan · Community Member · Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 06:05am
    that is very beautiful ^^ this is my favorite 3nodding

    comment korean_sibi · Community Member · Sun Aug 05, 2007 @ 02:36am
    Wow, Richy. . . these are amazing. Continue writing, these are so wonderful!

    comment -Ashlyyn Albane- · Community Member · Sun Sep 02, 2007 @ 05:58pm
    Wow!
    Richy-kun...that is absolute genius!
    You should get your work published! 4laugh

    The way you made this poem really spoke to me.

    Write on! (pun intended xd )

    from
    Miss L33t


    comment Perogogo · Community Member · Mon Dec 17, 2007 @ 04:06am
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