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Richard's life *NOW 20% MORE INSIDE MY HEAD!*
Anything that you have honestly wanted to know about me, you'll find it here. What i'm going through, as well as poems, and how my week has gone, etc etc.
Evils
A smile, hid by millions of tears,
cries out to the ignorant world;
“Set me free, please, I beg of you!”
Thousands of children, wrists red with sadness,
Accepting hate and pain to avoid empty hearts,
They cry to be cared for, to be loved.
Hundreds gather in the bone yards,
grieving for the nameless souls lost,
their spirit bound to an eternal gravestone.
Countless faces disappear, fading to blackness,
never to be heard from again, yet
another win for the Dark One.
Our Evils, suffocating the light source,
slowly killing our lives, and raping
the Future we sacrificed Our bodies for.


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  • User Comments: [7]
    *shivers* creepy but so true. I think I might send this one to my boyfriend since he likes creepy stuff like that maybe he could relate to it. Its awesome though. *thumbs up*

    comment Squishy Little Pip-Squeak · Community Member · Tue May 22, 2007 @ 11:38pm
    Sad. I don't like this one. =

    comment Kaikamahine o Pele · Community Member · Wed May 23, 2007 @ 08:36am
    I heart IT!
    It's so metaphorical,
    The same kind of poetry I make,
    Dark, slytly Sad and it really makes you think.
    I like how the poem flows, each sentence is connected,
    But puts forward a new idea.

    BLOODY BRILLIANT!


    comment Perogogo · Community Member · Thu May 24, 2007 @ 02:49am
    If only I looked at this one first...
    NEW FAVORITE! mrgreen
    Maybe you could make it longer... less briefly explain your ideas. I'm not telling you to make them as long as mine though lol... I wouldn't torture you like that. xd

    comment ~~FocusUnbreakable~~ · Community Member · Thu May 24, 2007 @ 03:09pm
    I'm speechless.

    comment angelofthehidden · Community Member · Sat Jun 09, 2007 @ 11:07pm
    ...
    So depressing.
    Reminds me of me.
    Stop doing this, write happy!
    <3
    But very well written, I like it's structure.

    comment Underscare · Community Member · Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 07:14am
    Yes, I'm finding this one harder to make a comment for. I like it very much, its very interesting and deep. Wonderful job.

    comment [ Blackrose ] · Community Member · Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 02:00pm
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