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Richard's life *NOW 20% MORE INSIDE MY HEAD!*
Anything that you have honestly wanted to know about me, you'll find it here. What i'm going through, as well as poems, and how my week has gone, etc etc.
My Demonic Hell
Deep in the eyes of Death I stare,
begging to be set free from my torture.
He lashes out at me, throwing my limp body
Into a pool of lava, screams bellowing out.
I emerge, my head still held high, yet
My heart lays in my hand, cold, black, lifeless.
I charge at the hellish one,
Shouts of justice filling my heavy lungs.
One blank, forever an eternity.
I fight with my dead heart, red with hate
No matter how hard I try, I always fail.
This monster, the one inside me,
He forces me to jump off the cliff
and fall to my death.
This monster, the one controlling me,
Kills the love I held back for Her.
Struggling, I fight, to regain what I lost
My heart, black with rage, I stand tall.
Panting, on my knees, I raise my hand.
This monster, my demonic hell,
lays in the ground, never to be seen again.


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  • User Comments: [6]
    *gasp*
    YAY!
    It's.... soo... depressing... but that's okay so are mine! blaugh
    Hm... maybe a more prominent opening/ending. Still seems to float in and out... but that just is my opinion.

    comment ~~FocusUnbreakable~~ · Community Member · Thu May 24, 2007 @ 03:05pm
    Cool! I made a poem too. Here it is:

    You can't escape.
    This world is a living abyss.
    No matter how many times you die,
    it always leads to this place.
    Heaven or Hell?
    No matter what you pick,
    you're trapped.
    Once you get sent to Heaven,
    your wings will break off.
    Sending you to right where you started.
    This bottomless pit where you'll perish,
    perish in your own life.

    When you wish you're alive,
    it's all the same.
    You'll want to embrace death.
    Let the reaper steal all that's left of you.
    Besides, you're a mere mortal.
    Your foolish words of love,
    wanting someone there for you.
    Your sappy and cliche life,
    only brings you closer to me.
    Where I'll bring this demonic world,
    to an end.
    Where the reaper,
    shall rule.

    comment Kage-sama-dono · Community Member · Sat May 26, 2007 @ 03:06am
    WOW! This reminds me of the dark side of my boyfriend and I. Damn this is good. Very enlightening and soothing in a way. Thanks again.

    comment Squishy Little Pip-Squeak · Community Member · Sun May 27, 2007 @ 09:45pm
    I understand you're feeling in this, I know it all to well.

    comment angelofthehidden · Community Member · Sat Jun 09, 2007 @ 11:00pm
    Another very well written one.
    This is my 2nd fave, Love you bro.

    comment Underscare · Community Member · Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 07:16am
    Love all the pictures this poem in your head gives you, its a great poem.

    comment [ Blackrose ] · Community Member · Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 01:55pm
    User Comments: [6]

     
     
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