Kay, this is a poem that I'm working on in class. We have to make our family some... object or something then make them parts of that object. Mine wasn't exactly an object, but you get the picture.
My family is a field hospital thrown into chaos after an enemy attack.
My brother, Anthony, is the fallen soldier, crying out in pain as a nurse rushes to his side.
My mother is the nurse, fussing over the soldier worriedly as she tries to wrap his leg.
My father is the commander, looking on at the soldier sadly, but a speck of hope, though faint, still remains in his aged eyes.
My brother Mike, is an unfortunate bystander who just happened to get caught in the fray.
My little brother, Sammy, is the happy drunk, who just happened to stumble into the tent, trying to make people laugh by doing anything to get attention.
My brother, Dominic, is the doctor to the injured bystander, talking and laughing with his patient, as he usually does.
I am the silent peacekeeper who has seen it all and wants it to end, cursing under my breath, and yet... hoping for the best.
Yep, that's it. ^_^ Comments would be appreciated. Constructive criticism only!!
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