Here's a Sonnet I wrote for class. It's not that good... but oh well! Comments are always appreciated! ^_^
A mother in waiting for child's embrace
Heavy with fear from her daughters' discourse.
'The foe the wrought hither thought nought of thee'
Doth she not see woe in her mothers' eyes?
Pain lie a-bleeding in her breast like thorns
churning and growing, never to settle
A plague this girl was, with nought but rude will.
When would she return to this woman's arms?
There is no resolve to this awful case,
No way to end this endless baleful woe
So now she sits, hoping for good tidings.
Waiting for her bless'ed girl to return,
to be in this woman's embrace once more
and to dispatch of that piteous foe.
I had to base it off a situation that I got on a paper. The situation was a mother disagreeing with her daughter for going out with a guy that she does not approve of. So... yeah. I thought I'd do the mothers' point of view... just to be a little different.
A mother in waiting for child's embrace
Heavy with fear from her daughters' discourse.
'The foe the wrought hither thought nought of thee'
Doth she not see woe in her mothers' eyes?
Pain lie a-bleeding in her breast like thorns
churning and growing, never to settle
A plague this girl was, with nought but rude will.
When would she return to this woman's arms?
There is no resolve to this awful case,
No way to end this endless baleful woe
So now she sits, hoping for good tidings.
Waiting for her bless'ed girl to return,
to be in this woman's embrace once more
and to dispatch of that piteous foe.
I had to base it off a situation that I got on a paper. The situation was a mother disagreeing with her daughter for going out with a guy that she does not approve of. So... yeah. I thought I'd do the mothers' point of view... just to be a little different.
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