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Richard's life *NOW 20% MORE INSIDE MY HEAD!*
Anything that you have honestly wanted to know about me, you'll find it here. What i'm going through, as well as poems, and how my week has gone, etc etc.
Resistance is Futile
Slipping, my grip rapidly looses hold,
with thoughts of you slipping through my hands.
Darkness, slowly beginning to encase me,
hastening its death-grip on my loose soul.
Escape, the only thing running through my mind,
The Light, Your Light, I quickly begin to try to find.
I look around, staring deep into the deep abyss.
I feel nothing, I see nothing, I become nothing.
I try to resist my master’s newly found grip,
But His hand strangles me, and makes me obey.
Outside, I feel nothing. Inside, I continue to try to resist,
Yet no matter how hard I try, I fail.
“You can’t resist, my slave” he tells me,
Before striking me down with his might.
I slowly look around, still surrounded by darkness,
Hate beginning to form in my heart for my master’s person.
I try to strike back, yet I’m chained to memories,
My memories, of the people who hurt me in past times.


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  • User Comments: [7]
    Hey, this is the one I edited!!
    You didn't keep my add-ons... oh well. xD
    This is one of my favorites of yours, though we talked about some things that you could improve on. ^^; Overall, Focus-Chan likes.

    comment ~~FocusUnbreakable~~ · Community Member · Thu May 24, 2007 @ 03:02pm
    WOW> *is speechless again* My God my boyfriend should read these. I think I am going to send this one to him cause he could relate to this even though its not written by him. *hugs* Its awesome.

    comment Squishy Little Pip-Squeak · Community Member · Sun May 27, 2007 @ 09:43pm
    I like it,
    But, try to stay on topic.
    You start off about your darkness and 'someone' helping you through it, like a guiding light, and then quickly your talking about your master.
    Poetry doesn't have to make sense, but keep in mind it still has to flow.
    Besides that, I like it very much blaugh

    comment Perogogo · Community Member · Sun May 27, 2007 @ 11:05pm
    You seem to currently using this topic alot...
    are you having some issues with someone trying to 'control' you?
    Sorry sweatdrop Totally off topic ...
    *Likes to pry into people's personal life xp *

    comment Perogogo · Community Member · Sun May 27, 2007 @ 11:07pm
    You'll get better, promise. I'm sorry you got hurt, I know how you feel.

    comment angelofthehidden · Community Member · Sat Jun 09, 2007 @ 11:04pm
    Hurt is never good, I like how this is written.
    Hate the sadness and pain.
    x.x

    comment Underscare · Community Member · Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 07:15am
    The past can be such a damaging thing, I'm sorry Richy ):

    comment [ Blackrose ] · Community Member · Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 01:58pm
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