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Revolver for Suicide
It's a song I wrote...Tell me what you all think. wahmbulance You might get the feelings of: Depression, Emoness and Despair. You have been wahned.


T'was the usual night,
We had a fight.
But this time wasn't all the same,
With flying fists and unfair kicks
I just wanna get away.

I keep my pride.
But I can break.
They've always treated me like a pig,
'St yelling at me, screaming at me,
"I wanna die I wanna die" I tell myself.

-chorus-

Will you free me from these infidels,
Free me from this neverending dream.
Will you help me pull the trigger
The trigger of a Revolver for Suicide.

I defend myself.
I try to run.
But they keep on pushing me to the realm,
With no help, I hate the world
And think of all their happy lives.

It makes me sick.
The world's a lie.
They say I es-ca-lated the fight.
I say ******** YOURSELF, ******** THE WORLD
Right inside my wicked mind.

-chorus-

Will you wake me from this nightmare,
Let me go and watch me just fade away.
Dreaming of the freedom together,
Just me and my Revolver for Suicide.


It's depressing, and I think it explains the mind of someone that's thinking about suicide.
Anyways, this case only, I WANT constructive criticism. So help the Jap out!

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  • User Comments: [3]
    Tenshi Kurama
    Community Member





    Tue Feb 06, 2007 @ 07:04pm


    Damn SR... that is depressing... sad I don't want you to ever feel like that again so if you need me, talk to me I'll be here. But other than that, it's not a bad song. In order for me to give much more than that I'd have to hear the song actually sung to get an idea of what it's like... gomen nasai. sweatdrop


    Yrstruley
    Community Member





    Fri Feb 09, 2007 @ 11:12pm


    Shoa please don't talk like that...honestly I don't like it. But it's nicely put together.


    Aphelia Morphian
    Community Member





    Sun Feb 11, 2007 @ 05:32am


    quite short, put together very well. The meaning of it causes me to feel the same way for the things I think of. Bringing the images and idea of it is pretty well decriptive and sets a vivid picture. nicely done.


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