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The Untold Conflict...Prologue |
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Well, this is a basic prologue for a game I'm trying to make in a few years. Tell me what you guys think. Underscores are used for indentations.
__Land Tactics Commander Isaac, the only Beast onboard the scout ship Sentry, had been summoned to the command bridge. Highly skilled in marksmanship and close-quarter combat, he had joined the Belvius Republic Armed Forces, BRAF for short, against his will, to prevent the BRAF from launching a LA5T from the Standoff Mass-Annihilation Gun, or SMAG for short. It is an enormous magnetic accelerator cannon capable of launching objects of great mass from great distance, usually out of enemy's range. One shell from the gun could annihilate the whole planet. So, taking advantage of the threat, the BRAF forcifully recruited many great warriors.
__The majority of the soldiers were not happy, however. Because of the Beasts' high combat capability, the mix of aliens were jealous of them. So, of course, the lower commanders sent majority of the Beasts to the frontline invasion force headed towards a planet the higher-ups call "The Blue Jewel."
__So, even though Isaac had the highest possible rank for the Land force, he faced many segregation from the soldiers, especially Scourges and Assassins. Of course, he did not like them whatsoever, but orders are orders, and he had to follow all orders from Space branch of the BRAF, even if it means following orders given from Engineer class servants, as long as they were enlisted in that particular branch.
__"I heard you have an exccellent battle record, ALL from the lasst war." An Assassin said in a rather hateful tone. "And THAT record wass gained from killing many of USS. Don't exxpect resspect from me...I still don't trusst you, although the idiotss at the High Command think it'ss a good idea..." Isaac simply replied by glaring at him.
__When he arrived the corridor to the bridge after the frequent hateful words from the soldiers, he was asked for his ID, a retinal scan, a DNA scan, then FINALLY entered the room. "That's just an overkill security for such a small ship..." Isaac grumbled to himself.
__"You are late," said one of the Guardians in a low rumbling voice. "Don't expect such indecipline in the battlefield, Beast..."
__"Yes, sir." Isaac replied, although he had much more to say. But he knew Guardians did not appreciate any "reasons," or excuses, as they often call them. So he kept his jaws shut.
__"Our objective for this recon mission is to see if this planet," He pointed at the little orb floating in the holotank, "is inhabitable and inhabited. If it is inhabited by sentient life, then we send a request to the invasion cruiser Apocalypse. If it isn't and is inhabitable, then we scout the surface for three units and send the report to the High Command. Either way, engagement during any of the phases is prohibited. Understood?" The Guardian finished his long speech.
__"Yes sir, but why are you telling ME this?" Isaac asked in a puzzled tone.
__"So that you don't get funny ideas and go off on your own," the giant replied in a rather irritated tone. "I still don't trust your kind...Until they prove themselves against the apes at the Jewel. At any rate, that is all. You are dismissed."
__Isaac simply replied "Yes sir," then left the bridge.
So what do you guys think? Is it good? Want to read more?
 SuicidalRevolver · Sat Feb 03, 2007 @ 10:08am · 4 Comments |
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