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my life, my words, my fault...
a new poem again lol ill try to put a new one on each day but i personnaly think tht they r getting worse anyway comment if u want


i see a light
i hear a sound
i smell a room
i taste a tear
i feel a hand
people all around asking what is wrong
people all around trying to help
i see the body
i hear the people
i smell the blood
i taste the regret
i feel the remorse
people gather from all around
people cry when...


suffer in silence
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  • User Comments: [10]
    OMFG!!!!!!!!!!! i realli like this poem! itz sad cry

    comment Deathdealer65 · Community Member · Fri Sep 15, 2006 @ 10:27pm
    this one is the best yet blaugh blaugh

    comment Dark Neo Vamp · Community Member · Fri Sep 15, 2006 @ 11:07pm
    btw i want ppl to guess what the last 2 words r
    the ones tht i missed off pm me if u think tht u know
    ill put the real words in my journal in two days lol

    comment suffer in silence · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 12:58am
    *comments once again, in hoping to get another item*

    comment Dark_Zack2735 · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 01:51pm
    "I'm alive"?

    haha nah kidding ya, and you cant spell regret

    i like it, maybe a bit too simple..

    can u make any rhyming poems? cuz this all seems like random words put together in a "poetic" way.

    comment Hatsuharu_Sohma19 · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 06:27pm
    do we get a prize for knowing the 2 words?

    comment Hatsuharu_Sohma19 · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 06:28pm
    yay got the words!!! yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!

    DIE BIATCHS!!!

    comment Hatsuharu_Sohma19 · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 06:29pm
    wow i like this poem but its like a girl with depression it sounds like what i use to be like.....

    comment flyingconker · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 08:35pm
    riz stop it yes u do get a prize well u have lol

    hmmm it does sound kinda depressing
    well i guess thts what my mood was like at the time

    comment suffer in silence · Community Member · Sun Sep 17, 2006 @ 10:22am
    this is good but upsetting nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

    comment Delta64 · Community Member · Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 11:29pm
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