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my life, my words, my fault...
okies well i said tht i would try and do another poem 4 2day so this is what i came up with during some spare time tht i had and b4 u say it i know tht its rubbish


it also has no title

i look around
and all i see are books
books about artists and authors
poems and plays
life and death
i feel at home
all alone here
in this musky place
filled with books
no one to moan
at me about
things i didn't do
or things that i might
it's quite and peaceful
it's calm and relaxed
i sit down
to admire the view
the silence surrounds
i hear the
gentil tap tap
of rain outside
the ventilation clicks
on and off breaking
the forced silence
the lights flicker
as if they're trying
to stay awake
to stay alive
a movement
a voice
a person appears
shuffling around
placing books away
a smiile
a wave
then she disappears
the silence returns...



i hpe tht u like it sweatdrop


suffer in silence
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  • User Comments: [8]
    ah so thats what u were doing in the library today xd

    comment Hatsuharu_Sohma19 · Community Member · Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 05:25pm
    I like this one it's well done blaugh

    comment Dark Neo Vamp · Community Member · Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 05:36pm
    lol its a cool poem..... lovz roxie

    comment flyingconker · Community Member · Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 05:42pm
    Yeah, this one was better than the last one, seemed to flow more and wasn't as repetitive.


    Well done.

    comment Thank God lm an Atheist · Community Member · Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 07:23pm
    *comments on hoping to get an item* whee

    comment Dark_Zack2735 · Community Member · Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 10:22pm
    omg u like it thts weird stare heart
    thankies heart

    comment suffer in silence · Community Member · Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 11:38pm
    c smile biggrin l

    I just atreived my sealed envelope, cool profile.

    Nice poems

    comment x new x · Community Member · Fri Sep 15, 2006 @ 02:27am
    wow i like this one

    go little cass yay

    comment Delta64 · Community Member · Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 11:28pm
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