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my life, my words, my fault...
woot ppl seem to like them well lets see when tht changes shall we...


the wind whips through my hair
the wind calling
calling out to me

the chill cuts through my clothes
the chill killing
killing me slowly

the light shines through my shadow
the light blinds
blinds my eyes

the dark crawls through my heart
the dark engulfs
engulfs my soul


suffer in silence
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  • User Comments: [7]
    This one's kind if cool I don't like it as much as the others though

    comment Dark Neo Vamp · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 03:46pm
    im sorry, but i dont like poetry that is about death and depression, not my style. i tried it once and failed horribly.

    comment Dark_Zack2735 · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 04:03pm
    hmmmm its ok...did it take u about 5 minutes tho? it seems like u wrote it just for the sake of it..

    and yeah dark_neo_vamp im not too keen on depressive poems anymore, it annoys me sometimes, makes me wanna slap the person and say "wake up! welcome to life b***h! yeah its s**t but dont mean u gotta be all emo-sasuke on it"

    xd

    nah cass i luv ya rlly

    comment Hatsuharu_Sohma19 · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 06:21pm
    fine by request i will try to make a poem tht is happy and rhymes this is going to be fun
    stare
    *glares at haru and vamp*
    but it might not be the next poem tht i put on here

    comment suffer in silence · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 06:34pm
    wow loves this poem it awsum bab[x][x][x] biggrin

    comment flyingconker · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 08:33pm
    woot though i commented this guess not

    comment Delta64 · Community Member · Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 11:25pm
    very kool check out my journal for my poem

    comment gundam eliminator · Community Member · Fri Oct 13, 2006 @ 04:15pm
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