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Hello, my name is Sasume Hakori...and I'm dead. Part 2
Another crappy chapter.....enjoy.
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"Sasume! Get your a** over here!" That damn demon, he's getting on my last nerve. I am getting torctured by him now. "b***h! Get over here!" "Why don't you make me you ugly f*****t!" Ugh, dealing with him is whats making being dead the worse thing ever in my life. "What did you just say?!" What do you know..he's deaf too.

"I said 'Why don't you make me you ugly f*****t!' deaf guy." The only best thing to do, is to annoy him right back with my back talking. Who new it could be so much fun...not really. Well I knew, but that's just me. I can take it as far as I can and him still not even able to kill me. What an a*****e. Not like I would really die or anything, but hey! Could give it a try for once.

"Uggggh, i'm gonna get the devil! He'll hear about your damn a** attitude." "Oh and he hasn't heard about it before? Not like he can do anything. He's just a jackass devil who thinks he's all that." "Don't you dare talk about the lord like that!" "Lord? Since when in hell did he become the lord? I thought that was god, or jesus, or something." "You...You're gonna get it!" "What ever, f**." Then off the stupid demon ran to tell his so called lord to get me in trouble. Isn't being dead just fun to hear about?....No. It. Freakin'. Sucks.

It's been 2 weeks already since i've been dead and have wondered why i got here. I already said it was probably form who I was...but then again, what the hell? This a** joint is annoying me and for once, I actually want to go home. Nothing here excites me, or makes me happy. It's hell. Pure ********, stinking, unjoyful hell. The lord must've hated me bad.

"Hakori! Devil wants to see you." "Great, the jackass." "Don't ins-" "Shut up." I sent a death glare at him which made the guy shut up. My onyx, black, piercing eyes always scared everyone. When I meant something...I meant somethin. And dammit, I meant for that guy to shut up.

....Did I ever mention how hot hell was. I had to literlly rip apart my school sleaves just to even get cool and ruin my socks too. Got, down here for one day alive, you'd be crisp bacon, and then rotting to you're own, painless death. Then hell would rise over you, taking yo in to their death. Swallowing your pur soul into the darkness they are. Making your every second miserable, hard, pain, hurtful-- ....I'll stop there.

"Whats up jackass?" "What's with your attitude? You have no right to be down here and insult me. Obey me!" "Why should I?" "I'm your master!" "Yeah right, I don't see a sign of 'I'm Sasume's master!' anywhere." "Why you little.." "Little? Myabe to you, but for a 14 year old girl like me, i'm 5.9" and that is tall for a girl." "You shut your smart a** mouth!" "Why don't you make me?" "Fine, if that's what you want, I will."

Great....this will be interesting.

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This sucked....yet again. Wonder what the devils gonna do...


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  • User Comments: [1]
    when a new person speaks, use a new paragraph--unless you intend them to be talking over one another's words. Also, when using measurement, spell it out. For example:
    That second to last paragraph
    "Whats up jackass?"

    "What's with your attitude? You have no right to be down here and insult me. Obey me!"

    "Why should I?"

    "I'm your master!"

    "Yeah right, I don't see a sign of 'I'm Sasume's master!' anywhere."

    "Why you little.."

    "Little? Myabe to you, but for a 14 year old girl like me, i'm five-nine and that is tall for a girl."

    "You shut your smart a** mouth!"

    "Why don't you make me?"

    "Fine, if that's what you want, I will."
    Other than that, so far so good. ^_^

    comment Dragon student · Community Member · Tue Sep 12, 2006 @ 03:00am
    User Comments: [1]

     
     
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