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Richard's life *NOW 20% MORE INSIDE MY HEAD!*
Anything that you have honestly wanted to know about me, you'll find it here. What i'm going through, as well as poems, and how my week has gone, etc etc.
Never Let Me Go.

As we lay under the star-filed sky
and watch as the moon passes us by,
I hold you close, and you say,
"don't ever let me go."
As the snow gently covers the ground
in the peaceful sky-blue afternoon,
I hold you close and say,
"don't ever let me go."
As the rain falls in sheets,
never stoping for a breath,
I shead a tear and tell you,
that I won't ever let you go.


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  • User Comments: [11]
    I love it can u comment in mine too please? Who's that girl?

    comment ~ O_o NaRuTo FrEak O_o ~ · Community Member · Sat Mar 18, 2006 @ 05:18pm
    k. I'm going to be critical about this one. . . . it's cute and sad and sweet. . . . but tears in the rain? How can you tell? I think you can improve it. smile

    comment Kaikamahine o Pele · Community Member · Tue Mar 21, 2006 @ 01:22am
    awww

    comment Expo Crayon · Community Member · Fri Mar 24, 2006 @ 01:54am
    cute!!

    comment ~Kala Hikari~52722~ · Community Member · Fri Mar 24, 2006 @ 02:04am
    i like it. it's really original and you are really good. 3nodding

    comment xxpsychoticlifexx · Community Member · Sun Mar 26, 2006 @ 02:27am
    That is so powerful...

    comment Yazebella · Community Member · Sun Mar 26, 2006 @ 08:21pm
    About the tears in the rain... He can tell because he's the one crying. Duh. xd

    Anyway, this one could use some re-working. The rhythm's off a bit.

    comment Black Amaranth · Community Member · Tue Mar 28, 2006 @ 09:21pm
    are these based on personal experiences? they are so real and dramatic!

    comment Amy free spirit · Community Member · Fri Apr 21, 2006 @ 10:10pm
    one again im likeing it richard

    comment maridox · Community Member · Sat Apr 22, 2006 @ 05:01am
    I'm the girl he is talking about, my name is michelle, if you don't believe me then just ask him

    comment Claws_of_Decay · Community Member · Sat May 06, 2006 @ 10:00pm
    eek niiice

    comment dta36 · Community Member · Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 01:26am
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