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Richard's life *NOW 20% MORE INSIDE MY HEAD!*
Anything that you have honestly wanted to know about me, you'll find it here. What i'm going through, as well as poems, and how my week has gone, etc etc.
The Day That I Found Her
it started on a warm summer brease, when my eyes first laid eyes on her.
i grew attached, then it dawned on me. i'm in love with her.
i saw my love, every where i went, and couldn't get her out of my head.
then, the one day that every man frears, but today was the day that i would dread.
i managed to get my act together, and decided to ask her:
"hey, would you like to go out with me sometime?"
she stammered, and was startled. all she could say, was "i...i...i..."
i told her that she didn't want to, that it would be ok.
as i started to walk away, my head down in shame
she said, "wait." as i looked back to her, she started to blush
then all i heard was "yes. i would be more than happy to go out with you."
i smiled, blushed, then out of no where, i hugged her, and said, "I love you."
she giggled, and said i love you back, then i held her in my arms and we walked off into the sunset, now as a couple.


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  • User Comments: [13]
    Awww it's sooo cute I love it heart heart heart You are truly great with writing poems 3nodding heart 3nodding heart 3nodding heart

    comment Gone1325 · Community Member · Wed Jan 18, 2006 @ 04:17am
    I wish i could write poems as good as you...

    comment RarestCleric · Community Member · Wed Jan 18, 2006 @ 09:26pm
    omg... that's so sweet,..... heart

    comment Jesus_iz_luv · Community Member · Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 09:24pm
    the beginning was kinda weird to understand at first but otherwise good ^_^

    comment [Hinata] [Hyuga] · Community Member · Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 10:52pm
    This one's good, but it could use some re-working. Nice rough draft, much better than a lot of crap people write. mrgreen

    comment Black Amaranth · Community Member · Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 11:02pm
    awww so sweet i love it

    comment ~Kala Hikari~52722~ · Community Member · Fri Jan 20, 2006 @ 11:37pm
    you are a great poet +you have imspired me to not be afriad thanks



    -tifa-

    comment PrincessKiaaN. · Community Member · Sat Jan 21, 2006 @ 05:16am
    It's good. It almost seems like a story in a way.

    comment Michkayla · Community Member · Sat Jan 21, 2006 @ 05:55am
    Love it... heart heart heart heart

    comment Expo Crayon · Community Member · Sat Jan 21, 2006 @ 02:40pm
    love it very romantic love *winks*

    comment ~ O_o NaRuTo FrEak O_o ~ · Community Member · Sat Mar 18, 2006 @ 05:41pm
    Beauty, pure utter beauty...I give you koodos

    comment Yazebella · Community Member · Sun Mar 26, 2006 @ 08:24pm
    thats ones again how i feel about my friend

    comment maridox · Community Member · Sat Apr 22, 2006 @ 05:06am
    that is sweet

    comment [-Amy-] · Community Member · Sat May 27, 2006 @ 02:17pm
    User Comments: [13]

     
     
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