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Poem: Our corruption
I wrote this poem ever so long ago and decided to post it cause I like it :3


Don't play with cruel intentions
a burning fever arising at a climax
the eyes of many glaring strangers
the kill of every stabbing word
Don't play with true emotion
A broken heart, falling into suicide
the eyes of every weeping stranger
the sorrow of hurt and forgotten words
Don't play with lost solutions
A destroyed idea that was unjustified
the confused eyes of every stranger
the tight grip of every lost word
Don't play with worlds domination
A destructive force evolving problems
the paranoid eyes of all those strangers
The rebellion unraveled of a leading word
Redemption
Fear brakes loose
our world falls apart
Vendetta
Betray our world and it's crying heart
let's fall into the land of hell


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  • User Comments: [1]
    NinteyDegrees_South
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    Wed Feb 20, 2008 @ 04:49am


    *speechless*
    you are a very talented poet big sis O:
    I suck at poems..i wrote a poem 'bout a happy girl..
    she fell on her face...


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