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Maria full of Grace
Hi there my name is Mary but my friends call me Gabi. Im the type of girl that seriously is obses with Panic! At the disco's Brendon Urie!! I mean have YOU seen him! He is truely hot!!!! I usually write poems about him so if you lik it read it!Enjoy!
cracked open
Who can't say that when they were little, they loved playing in the

playground? I thought the same thing, but everything changed when I learned

that not always, playing in the playground can be fun.


I remember it like it was just yesterday, a hot summer day, November

15, 1998. At that time I was living in Colombia. Mrs Clarita, my

kindergardern teacher, was showing us how to finger paint. I was having so

much fun with my friend, Alicia. We were painting each other colors of blue,

yellow, red, green, and white all over our uniforms. Suddenly, the principal

came to the loud peaker. She announced that an emergency assembly would be

held now. We got out of the classroom, and Mrs Clarita told us to hold hands.

Unfortunately, I was holding hands with the one person I hated the most.

Pedro Martinez was a small boy with brown hair, brown eyes, and his

teeth, the size of a hamster's. His tan skin was touching mine. He was

smiling at me, I felt like throwing up on his face, seeing if that would stop

him from smiling. We aproached the auditorium, as noisy as always. Us,

the 1st, and 2nd graders were first. The principal told us that "Old slide"

was dangerous. Since, 1990, "Old slide" was used, and a boy had died

because he felt down, and "Old slide" was ontop of him. We all had

to aboyed trying to play with it. Noone wanted another incident.

That afternoon, I told my parents about "Old slide". "Oh dear, that

sounds dangerous!" my mom exclaimed. I thought she was right. Mom is just

a simple, sweet, and caring person. She worried about anything, even if a fly

was hurt. "You better be careful, and not allow that crazy friend of yours

get you in any trouble" Dad was a very wise man. You think he's wrong at

first, but then, it turns out that he was right all the time. "What's that

noise? I can't hear Barney!!" Dennis, my brother, was a very tricky kid.

You've got to be careful 'cause he would try to make you feel bad in

anyway. At night, the phone rang. I picked it up , and it was Alicia.

"Hi!!", "Hello" Alicia sounded happy about something. "so... what are you

doing?!?" "nothing" she defenetly sounded fishy. "Hey, I have a plan, want

to hear it?" I knew it! Something was going on. "What?" I tried yo sound as if

I didn't care. "You promise not to tell anybody?" "Yeah, promise." Alicia

stopped for a moment. "Well, I'm going to tell you tomorrow, ok?" "Fine"

Alicia hanged up. Aww man, I wanted to know, I thought. Those words, "I have

a plan.." swirled in my mind like a song. I really want to know what it was.

I woke up at 6am, like always. Took a shower, changed, ate breakfast, grab

my stuff and go to school. The same rutine everyday. When class started, I

saw Alicia. She looked the same, there was never a difference, small with blond

hair, green eyes, peach skin, and her blue and white uniform. She was smiling

stood up, and grabbed my hand. She whispered, "Lets go to the bathroom

after lunch, and i'll show you my plan." Again, the word plan stocked me.

I was very curious, what might her plan be? After lunch, Alicia and I went

to the bathroom., but instead, she took me were "Old slide" was. "Look, isn't

beautiful?" She said smiling, as if I was happy too. "Come'on, lets clime!!"

She started going up the old, green, rusty stairs. I stepped back 4 steps.

I couldn't believe her, this WAS her plan!?! I was just staring, not moving,

eyes wide open. Alicia was happy, she was waving her hands up in the air.

I was very dissapointed, that my friend Alicia would think this way. I looked

down in shame, but i saw that "Old slide" was not connected to the floor!.

I gasp, trying to let out a huge scream. I couldn't do anything, 'cause "Old

slide" was like 6 feet tall!!. I tried to move my feet, to run and tell Alicia to

get down before abything bad can happen to her. I was paralyzed, scared,

and mad. In any momment Alicia could die. I shot my eyes tight, thinking

that this was not happening. BAMM!! I looked over, and saw Alicia in the

floor. She was screaming for help. Blood was all over her face, head and the

floor. "Old slide" was ontop of her. I still wasn't moving, I was just staring,

seeing how Alicia reached her hand out so I could help her. I didn't do

anything, I didn't even think of coming over to help her. "MARIA!! PLEASE

HELP ME!!" The janitor seemed to hear her sreams, and came running. He

pushed over "Old slide" a bit, enought to get Alicia out. When the janitor

picked up Alicia, he looked at me and turn his back at me. Alicia opened her

eyes, her face covered with blood, she looked at me and then closed them

again.

I went outside, looking over at how people came to see what was going on.

When the ambulance came, Alicia was put into the strecher. Her body covered

with blood, her head cracked open. Even though, I knew that I was going to be

in huge trouble, not only with my parents, but with the principal. Then I knew

that I should never let a friend get me into this kind of trouble, not only

because I would get into trouble, but so noone gets hurt. 2 months past, and I

never saw Alicia again, some people say that she moved to USA, others say she

now hunts the school's playground, and every afternoon, after the

kindergardern's lunch finish, everyone can hear her screams, and she saying

"MARIA!!!HELP ME!!!". But I know that now, shes in a better place.


B3Ba
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  • User Comments: [1]
    Damn girl your gettin better and better in writing stories almost as good as me~!!! But, Maria was the story true did your friend really die infront you? It kinda creeped me out a little with the head cracke dopen part but the thing I don't get is wtf is Old side maria?

    comment SweetSolstice27 · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 03:07pm
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