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Title: Unloved - Part one
Score: 6.2659
Total Ratings: 439
Total Comments: 110
Rank: 0
Comments you received
wing_goddess
maybe u'd be loved more if u loved urself enough
not to poison yourself day by day by smoking.
DaddyLittleGirl1985
8
Ingrid Anette
nice tough
pjykhbab
lol
exit758190
Oh!... quite extrordinary!!
~coco_kiki_quester~
cool
dan 234
kinda nerdy
Nerzerz
What? The girls don't like him? Even with his
ANIMAL magnetism? Sorry I had to say it, lol. I
liked the story, and your avi fits really well
with it. Great job!
IchigoKurosaki-DeathKing
i don't get it
The Shop Helper
Thats a pretty cool avatar
KakashiH456
very good. :]
(~Nazi-0f-Luff~)
o3o reminds me of the manga loveless...
xhjsdawd
uh, yeah, uh
Nathaniel_The Freak
cool =)
B a b i B r e e z y
umm 9/10 good job though i hope your avar winsss
go_4_it_girl
he is hot!!!!!!!!!!!
AbsoluteRuler
Hmm.. You should get a real flower XD
snofox507
it's not supposed to be a flower... it's supposed
to be the clover, symbolizing luck. if it were a
flower, it wouldn't make sense. and speaking of
not making sense... whoever it was on the first
page that said it didn't--you are a retard. thank
you, and goodbye for now
donte1204
smoking is bad 4 u
shadow-warrior234
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahashahah
a lol
Soua14
Kinda ok but u could do better
prohibited_948694
hmm.. very impressive
jimchou0
23rd
My Mules Mule
very cute fox boy
e t a - n a r u
lol. I like the story but take out the smoking.
HarryPottersSecretAdmirer
interesting
~Pixie Sprint~
....
snofox507
three things... 1: if you have NOTHING to say but
lol, ..., or just cool, then your comment will be
deleted. 2: if you're going to complain about the
smoking, then too bad. it's part of the story, and
my personality, so DEAL WITH IT 3: thanks for the
positive comments so far. i appreciate it. but
'constructive criticism' is appreciated as well.
if you're just going to flame me, your comment
will be deleted as well. Tha's all for now! See
ya'll later! heart
Poupoule
^^
Soua14
i agree wit wing_goddess
Bon-turn
I think you did a great job! The stre is great! I
think it is simple but in a good way. There isn't
too much stuff to confuse the eyes! !0/10
Derakon
sure
-DJ- P H A R C Y D E
Loser.
daetriusmyst
I kind of like this one, he does look like a
college student.
relativity605945
Omg so awesome
steam767787
pretty amazing <3
AroAge
Thats a pretty cool avatar
xXXxTiFFanYxXXx
hmm~expect ur story will be going...avi not bad
too
Avionnah
you are loved..with someone which you don't even
know exists..trust me.. wink
mallary
very good job^^ awesome description and cute avi^^
blue-eyedfantasy
cool
yaypelicans
too many furries
pink_hchan
Nice.
happy___bunny_1735
sexy man
Made For Disco
Thats a pretty cool avatar
TTTheEnd
Omg kinda astonishing
Trolly Troll
emo die!!!
wfyycktt
cute
snofox507
Thanks again for the positive imput. Screw you to
all the negative comments, which either have been
or will be deleted. But seriously... critique me!
Don't just say 'cool' or 'OMG quite
astonishing'... The story will continue, but I'd
like at least a little bit of input so I can tweak
things around a bit. Of course, the attire will
change along with the story, but still... actually
SAY something useful. Thanks again! heart
Kazuma2214
nice
The Shop Helper
Thats a pretty cool avatar
Beata99
i cant wait for next week. ^^
.PandyGirls.Boyfriend.
You made me read all that and it still sux!!!
AHHitsAlexis
ahah emo. gross.
xXLloyd hikomariXx
pretty awesome.
kanflyer
Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a
little too much and you should definalty get
yourself an OMG
Edward_Elric_06
7
Nixtie
a smoking fox.
Kazuma_uzumaki
not a winner
feelmyhaks
Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a
little too much and you should definalty get
yourself an OMG
Utsuneko Princess
well, i do not like the story much, but the avi is
AWESOME!!!!! so 9.
5_of_Spades
biggrin
Yozaku
cool
angelpup_princess
NO! I don't like this avi 1/10 nice try though
edgeguard
Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a
little too much and you should definalty get
yourself an OMG
Luigi 316
nao hikari
Omg this is good XD
xXLloyd hikomariXx
extremely joyful :]
heartofsilver777
cute 8
XxX Angel_Passion XxX
LMFAO
devilblueeyes
lame and borrrrring
Dragonsinrage
bump
Hossman
7
Shefura
cool!
Angel Essayez
nice outfit, nice story. 10/10 smile
Wienars Galore
Thats a pretty cool avatar
Heidi-san
10/10 something about this one...
((Gaara))((Kun))
Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a
little too much and you should definalty get
yourself an OMG
Spikeband
Just a heads up, this is the Avatar Arena, not the
"I'm gonna give you some crappy story, with an
even crappier avatar arena."
torosentado
cool
Suvaka Star
no smoking! then your chances of being love will
go up, after all, girls like boys with cute ears!
Lmao. very nicely done by the way ^^
onirule
ok?
lendldumadag
Too Gay....
DonoNobody
yay smokey mcsmokerson!!! and your smoking
smokers!!! 9/10
Artemide_Luna
sweet
feelmyhaks
Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a
little too much and you should definalty get
yourself an OMG
Jupiter Popsicles
Well, it matches the story, so...... I guess that
means it's pretty nice! ^_____^
Mitsukumuro
ummm I think it's part of a book if you didnt read
the Description...6-6
stalkingpinoy
Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a
little too much and you should definalty get
yourself an OMG
wrtliqzr
Kool i love it!!
The Ghostbuster
00
The Ghostbuster
.->
Sakika29
Nice
Madrake
Thats a pretty cool avatar
snofox507
Hey guys, it's me again. Firstly, deal with the
smoking, damnit! Second, this is my own true
story, not from some ******** book. Third, screw
you, all you negative commentors who aren't even
posting any form of constructive criticism
*deletes posts*. Fourth, thank you for the
positive feedback. Fifth, to you bots, go to
hell--I am not getting an OMG, so STFU and GTFO,
you SOB's.
BlueBowser
cool
K_R-20
Dont enter an avatar if you just want to enter a
story. it's an alright avatar too, you just need
more items of those colours.
V0Z
10/10
Knight of Alexandria
Very cute. Ignore the first comment, the cig adds
to the college kid look.
xneosanderz
smoking is bad for u!!! pretty good description!
Purple Carnation
XD I totally would've dated the hot guy.. If he
didn't smoke. And if he were real. wink
maxi 306
7/10 it to simple
darkmoon-tay
10
Dazeekruz
quite beautiful wee!
KatrinaLee88
so sorry about life lol
pxqqjuwr
uh, yeah, uh
frosty_rose
I agree with da first commenter
Adypie
nice
peaceful solitude
aww
KrAzY_MoMaS_gUrL
Very Nice
 snofox507 · Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 06:24pm · 0 Comments |
