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... remembrance...
... a walk through the park.. to a fair in the rain...
... a song in the dark; in the wind, it's sweet refrain...
... his body's warmth, I feel when he's close to me...
... a shared piano chair as his finger hits the key...
... never impatient he plays his songs with me...
... I laugh at his jokes and my heart sings songs....
... of a feeling so special, can it be wrong?....
... I guess I'll never know as my body grows cold...
... my skin against the dirt as the ground closes over my soul...






User Comments: [5]
Vandal Reaver
Community Member





Sat May 26, 2007 @ 06:32pm


This poem can relate to alot of people, I like it because it makes me think deep about things that I will miss in life...
Good job, I wish i could connect to people through poetry ^^
razz


Deltae
Community Member





Sat May 26, 2007 @ 08:55pm


*offers you a piano chair while playing "Päivänsäde ja Menninkäinen", on piano*.. One of the few songs I can play on it.. Just one silly finnish song that I sang for you once too ^^

Well for a poem it's good, even tho I don't really read that much of poetry usually :>


Musical Pomegranate Lad
Community Member





Sun May 27, 2007 @ 07:06pm


Jareth's Song
And as it was sold to death
The dream rolled off its breath
Never to be listened to, because no one ever knew
And although the life moved on
The whole of it was gone
And still no one could see, what should've had a chance to be


As you requested, I post my poem as a comment to yours. ^^


Time Waltzer
Community Member





Tue May 29, 2007 @ 05:07pm


It was good...but...again with the death at the end?
...honestly, keep thinking negatively, and negative things shall come.


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