For This is Me

• Artist: Fredella
• Description: "Learn life the hard way..." --- This is totally not my best, but I submit it anyway because I kinda like it. Please let me know what you think, if you don't like it, don't just type in "Eh, failed...", BUT GIVE EXPLANATION. "If there's smoke, there must be fire." So please leave a comment rationally & DON'T BE RUDE EVEN IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT. Thank you very much for reading! ;) & HAPPY READING!!!! :D
• Date: 10/02/2009
• Tags: hopelessness

For this is me...

Have you ever feel so empty,
That you just wanna cry?
Have you ever feel so weak,
That you just wanna die?

Painful tears in rainy days...
Cheerful fears in sunny days...

A heart without a home...
Feelings without hope...

Burn me,
Tear me apart...
Step on me,
And never look back...

A useless being...
A hopeless person...
Fake mask on the face...
With tearful torn heart inside...

Forget all about me...
Never remember me again...
For I never exist...
For that's the best thing you can do,
For me...

For hopelessness is my only friend...
For uselessness is my only love...
Lack of confidence...
Love, but not loved...
Painful, tearful, fearful heart...

For this is me...
For the truth is always harsh...

Comments

[Salornix]

I really liked this one! 5/5!
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[liboyx7]

*sniff* that was a sad writing..5 stars

[Amika Joli]

i hope this doesn't sound mean but that was a very depressing poem. you could have explained a little hope in life. but so far i kinda agree there are little moments when my life feels and looks just like that yet i have friends and others to cheer me up.