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Looking up into the stars hanging high
You see a shooting star, flying through the sky
You settle yourself down onto the midnight dew
And try to think of a wish that you what to come true
As you were thinking, you thought, this wish could backfire
And give you something else then what you desire
You tried to think of a wish that could help you each day
As you looked up to wish, the shooting star blew away
You were upset, then thought theres always next time
You sat up, closed your eyes, and heard the wind chime
You began to ponder on what you really needed
You got up to your feet and then proceded
As you searched for your answer, you found yourself to be wrong
For what you really needed was here all along
- by cool little mockingbird |
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- | Submitted on 04/08/2009 |
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- Title: Shooting Star
- Artist: cool little mockingbird
- Description: im going to enter this in a poetry contest. tell me if you like it or not, if you have any ideas or suggestions. i could use the help. the poem can only be less than or equal to 20 lines. thx to those who chose to help
- Date: 04/08/2009
- Tags: shootingstar
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- 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes - 04/12/2009
- i like it, the rhyming scheme is excellent =) good job
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