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Thought...Feeling......Pain....Suffer.......Memory....
IF you read if entry please tell me which poem you like better......

first poem:
Dream…….

Many people wish upon the stars,
But I wish upon the moon
Feel all the sadness from its face gives to me
Through all these bars,
Through this black room,
I dream to fly free like a bird

I have got what I wanted,
But why can’t I be happy?
I found my treasure by the same current water of life,
And by that same current of water,
I lost all my happiness and freedom....

The life I have wished for now is gone
Took the wrong steps to the river
Drowned into the deep floor of the river
Now I can’t see the real me
Or my old happiness I have built

the second one....
Feeble lights from the candle flickering in the long night
The hills are bleak, the mountains desolate, my heart frozen
Silence prevailed, except for the chirping of crickets
My soul touched, I am sleepless, looking up the sky where fluffs of clouds hover
I sense a partition wall on this lonely hill
The encaged bird is dreaming of freeing itself
May father and daughter be reunited?
For years of war, we were never apart
Yet now, we’re split up by walls of clouds
My solitude here in the ice-cold highland brings tears to my eyes,
But I keep on praying so mankind would be saved
Suffering and prison terms would be terminated
My father’s gone, I bear my guilt
But I’ll always hold on his love and trust
Years before he used to say: cherish your belief
With that in mind, I keep on going, crossing rocky mounds.
I persevere in my praying
Father, may your heart be never cold and lonely
Night falls, in the wind, I hear the word Impermanence
No longer do I have a father
Tears filled my eyes, drops of dew rolled
Where can be found the meaning of life


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  • User Comments: [1]
    Very touching poem I can relate myself to it all the way.
    maybe 1 year nothing will seems to be different but 3 years later I look back on myself, I've grown up

    domokun first one is better


    comment Coco Sensei · Community Member · Mon Apr 16, 2007 @ 05:38pm
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