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Journal of thy Scorpion's Confusions
My journal is here for me if you do read this then have the courtesy to accept what I write with an opened mind, for you do not know me and niether I of you. Please look but don't touch, understand but don't advise, comment politely but do not critiz
poem #2, ooh yeah baby
I'm sorry, please wait,
I'm two seconds too late.
you're gone, I'm here,
I wish you were near.
I cry, I whine,
I wish I was on time.
But I was surprised and scared,
I wish I didn't care.
I want I strive,
But it's all kept inside.
You said it, I heard it,
But all I did was ignore it.
Now I'm in pain and alone,
In my head I sob and moan.
But please just tell me again,
Don't let me hang on the end.
I pretend, I'm fake,
I slither like a snake.
I lost, I'm done
Because i thought you weren't the one.
And never again have i been me,
please help break me free.
With your eyes tell me again,
That you are my friend.
If not, I'll just slip away
from all you say.
Don't just leave,
Let me belive
You care.

...... yeah this guy said he loved me and i just let him walk away, my life story. Sometimes you're just to afraid of being disappointed, it's ok no one is perfect, sometimes you just got to learn it the hard way.


Gabalot
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  • User Comments: [4]
    I know i wrote this but i just want you to know i actually like this one, it has FEELING.

    comment Gabalot · Community Member · Fri Mar 18, 2005 @ 12:21am
    The emotion's cry out to me, as if I were the one depicted as "I" in the poem itself. Post more, I beg of thee.

    comment clussy mcwarcrime · Community Member · Fri Mar 18, 2005 @ 01:04am
    ok, joking, thanx. I always feel stupid rereading my poems but whatever. You're better any ways smile

    comment Gabalot · Community Member · Sat Mar 19, 2005 @ 03:31am
    Hello, you were the one that called me mean because of the patsy barnes thing.

    comment heavenly faith · Community Member · Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 06:06am
    User Comments: [4]

     
     
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