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WARNING: IF YOU REPOST ANY OF MY STORIES/POEMS/WHATEVER THE HELL IT IS WITHOUT GIVING CREDIT TO ME, I WILL FIND YOU AND SLAP YOU REPEATEDLY WITH A FISH. AND I MEAN IT!!!
My poem...
I wrote a poem.... tell me what you think of it...

On a couch, here I lay,
Waiting for him by day.

I made myself not try.
I made myself cry.

I made myself break,
And I made myself take.

But then he came along,
And showed me that I was wrong.

He told me to try.
He told me not to cry.

He told me not to break,
And he told me not to take.

I had you all along,
But sooner or later you’ll be gone.

I will not try.
I will cry.

I will break,
Then I will take.

Forever more,
Forever more,

Forever more,
My lord.


Nyapawlitan
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  • User Comments: [2]
    *clap clap clap* that good you wrote that by yourself wow

    comment MeowMix1993 · Community Member · Tue Apr 17, 2007 @ 02:13am
    thanks alex

    comment Nyapawlitan · Community Member · Mon May 14, 2007 @ 03:31am
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