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Here I go again.....
Poems
Never Ending


In the dark
I shine alone
In the light
I fade away
in people's eyes
I'm nothing

I want to belong
In the dark I want to disappear
Ing the light I want to shine
In people's eyes I want to see
the true me,

But how?
Am I really going to see the true me?
My sould wonders the Earth
Searching for a place,
A place I finally belong

Do I even belong?
Never ending questions....


With You


I close my eyes and dream
A light shines brightly on me
The warmth of the air
The whisper of your voice
The waltz of your touch
it's all just a simple dream....

I open my eyes and see you beside me
Is this really a dream?
I've longed for you by my side
To hold and comfort me
I wish you would be close to me
forever....
I finally realize...
It's not a dream
It's all true
I'm finally here with you
My life as your angel is now
I've reached my destiny
where I belong...
with you.....

Dying Slowly


She sat there staring towards the moon and stars. As she looked to the sky she wonders, " If you were here with me, would you still hate me the way you did?" So she sits on her porch every night, with a picture of him, in her hands staring out to the moon and stars, wondering oveer and over again what she has done to made him hate her. Each night the moon grows smaller and smaller along with her life. so she slowly drifts to death. Then one night she looked to the sky and saw no moon. then she cried and whispered softly to herself, "I'll finally be with you," as her last tears fall she closed her eyes and died with the same piture of him in her hands. She was finally with him again and she couldn't be more happier.


I would like it if all of you can give me any opinions on these 2 poems or this story. Thank to you all.


Post Permanent Link KiKi_BaByFaCe · Sun Aug 06, 2006 @ 07:02am · 14 Comments
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  • User Comments: [14]
    Wow that blows my mind! heart

     
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    comment Heretical Disciple · Community Member · Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 07:41am
    that's sad..... crying nice work thow......... smile

     
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    comment OredlynxO · Community Member · Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 09:53am
    Kiara! Stop feeling so emo =(

     
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    comment Animaznboy · Community Member · Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 11:26am
    the poems. Never Ending and Dying Slowly are very sad. i dislike sad feelings but they are really good x333

     
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    comment ~Were All Gonna Die~ · Community Member · Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 04:17pm
    I like the Poems There Really To Earth And Give Good Feelings!

     
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    comment Cutie Chi · Community Member · Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 05:28pm
    It's very mysterious...touching. I feel like I'm reading professional haiku. Good job! mrgreen

     
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    comment Zelphaer · Community Member · Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 06:08pm
    Elegant, Kiara! It's very heart-warming. But why is it all so sad? Why not make a blissful poem about love. Express your feelings in a happy way. ^_^;

     
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    comment Jazminny · Community Member · Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 06:28pm
    your really good way better than anyone i know 3nodding

     
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    comment end_rebirth · Community Member · Sat Aug 12, 2006 @ 12:06am
    Thank you you all!!! Much love!!! heart heart heart

     
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    comment KiKi_BaByFaCe · Community Member · Sat Aug 12, 2006 @ 06:30am
    You're a great poet, keep up the good work.

     
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    comment Wywy_Entropy Reborn · Community Member · Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 06:24am
    very very good
    keep it up

     
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    comment Raien3 · Community Member · Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 08:24pm
    Wat up Kiara! I gotta say they r good as alwz! But I have a lil bit of advice ...... could u try writing about a different subject?!

     
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    comment DaLilAsianInvasion · Community Member · Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 01:50am
    I like the story. It is miserably enjoyable. A dark cloud of sadness really. Or more like a razorblade of sweet pain, then nothingness. Almost . . . Poetic . . . And it seems . . . So real. How very interesting. I wonder which of the three came up with it, the depressed one maybe?


     
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    comment Living Zombie Girl · Community Member · Mon Oct 09, 2006 @ 04:25am
    I use to feel like that. alone in the dark. I never had any friends before last week. I was so alone. and now i found true love whihc has revlealed myself. my true me n_n tehehe! I wish i could write peoms like u even is some are sad. your soo good. I can't write peoms! =S

     
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    comment Kitty_Starlighter · Community Member · Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 05:36am
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