First entry!!! whoohooooooooooooooo!!!!
anyway, this is a stroy that ive been working on... enjoy!!!
Sometimes I think it’s not real. It’s like you’ve lived this life before. That you just got picked to redo your life again. That you’ve made a mistake that couldn’t be fixed so
Well, if that’s the case, then God is cruel. I wouldn’t think that God would choose you to live life over, only to die like this. I mean, I’m too young, and surely this death isn’t normal. It’s cruel and unusual punishment.
Chapter One
His eyes were mocking my helplessness; he had a cruel smile on his face. He had an insane look on his face; like this was the moment he had been waiting for all his life.
“Do you really think he will come for you now?” he asks, laughing.
Yes I think, I know he won’t let me down.
“He never really cared,” he continues still laughing at me, mocking me.
He will come, he will come.
Won’t he?
Yes.
“He is probably far away now, putting you out of his mind.”
Right now, he will come…
No he won’t.
He never cared… he never cared for me. I loved him.
“Alright,” he says, “enough fooling around.” With that he closed in for the kill.
He’ll come, he’ll come, he’ll come.
No, he isn’t coming.
There is a sharp pain and the dim light around me is getting dimmer.
This is it, he isn’t coming.
There was a noise, like a door opening. I felt him raise his head.
Is that him?
I could sense panic. He let me go and everything went black.
“Is she breathing?” I heard someone say. It was Vincent. He had come.
“Yes, I don’t think he really wanted to kill her, he just wanted to watch you suffer,” another voice says, was it Laurie?
“It’s too late isn’t it?” Vincent says, disappointment in his voice.
Why am I so cold? It’s the middle of summer.
“Yes. We didn’t make it on time.”
I moan and try to move, but I can’t. Am I pinned down? I open my eyes a little and saw that Ginny sitting on my legs, holding my torso down. The question was why is she holding me down? A strange sensation comes over me and I start to get extremely hot. I was burning up! I start to try to get up, Ginny won’t let me. I have to get outside though. I struggle beneath her, but she is too strong. Vincent lowers his face, so it is a few inches from mine.
“Stay still Sybil, nothing is going to happen now, you’re safe,” he says, in his deep, soothing voice.
“It’s so…hot…though, you…have to…let me…go!” it is hard to talk; my throat is burning up like the rest of me.
“No, it will be over soon, just lie still,” he said, stroking my face with the back of his hand.
I lay there, struggling a few times, only to give up a few seconds later. Then, what seems like an eternity, but was really only ten minutes, the burning went away and Laurie gets off my legs and starts pacing around the room.
“What happened? I thought you left me, I thought you didn’t care,” I sob. Vincent grips my shoulders and forces me to look into his eyes.
“You know I would never let anything happen to you!” Vincent says firmly.
“Where were you? I was so scared!”
“I’m sorry Syb, I’m so sorry,” he says. There are tears in the rims of his eyes. There was something else, something that he isn’t telling me.
“What happened, what aren’t you telling me?” I say, wiping my eyes with the back of my hand.
Vincent is crying, he strokes my face and kisses me gently. “I’m so sorry,” he says again.
I stare at him, not knowing what he is talking about and then finally, I dawns on me.
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