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my life within the small capacity of a notebook.
[[my poem]]

Memories of Pleasure

Listening to you speak now,
I can only remember those feelings.
Succumbed by the impeding darkness,
And only your words surround me.

Following the ebb and flow of your voice,
I could only listen and feel with my body.
You spoke of enticing things,
That only thrilled me more.

Using my own two hands to follow your lead,
An unrestrained passion pooled within my body.
As things began to happen, all I could do was wait-
Wait for the floodgates to open entirely.

Wondering how I will survive,
I can only wait for more.
As each second passes,
The pleasure grows more and more.

Soon it will override my mind,
And I will have no time to think.
The rush will knock me off my feet.
If I could stay on them that is.

As I pass between past and future,
Memory and reality,
I wonder when you'll give me
The second look at heaven.

Or was it hell that I saw?
I could not tell.
Pain and pleasure,
Rolled up into one.

As the floodgates burst open,
White-hot fires blind me,
And I feel the earth move beneath me,
Then become stunned with the after glow.

Trembling, and unsteady on my feet,
I look up into those blue-green eyes of yours,
I see that knowing smile on your lips,
And feel like going another round.

[[smooth....i like comments!]]


Razril of darkfnessflames
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Razril of darkfnessflames
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  • User Comments: [6]
    holy crap
    i like your poem
    its almost like mine

    comment xLost_X_Hopex 1013 · Community Member · Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 09:35pm
    This is an amazing poem...

    comment Kaiholo · Community Member · Sun Jul 29, 2007 @ 07:18am
    Cool poem, i liked it

    comment Misheru Ookami Inu · Community Member · Fri Sep 07, 2007 @ 08:28am
    Amazing attention to detail and diction.....I love it biggrin Is it about someone specific?

    comment Cranberry Cassie · Community Member · Sat Sep 08, 2007 @ 06:48pm
    that so sad and cute

    comment Pookie Loves U · Community Member · Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 09:04pm
    I do not know you but i must say that was the most beautiful poem that i have read in a long time and i applaud you.

    comment Poetic_Indulgence · Community Member · Sat Oct 13, 2007 @ 03:03pm
    User Comments: [6]

     
     
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