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Let My Wings Take Flight
Full of poem ideas, just ideas, thoughts, and what I like. Can be crazy at times and is not always thought to make sense
Ok, I'm not sure what happened but I had made a poem thing but now its gone and I'm sad crying so I'm going to try and remake it. stare But it won't be as good...

I walk on
I don't know where I am
The sky is white
The world a blur
Fog and mist whirling at my feet

I walk on
There are figures
In the mist
As they reach I pull away
The fear of not knowing
Grabbing my heart

I walk on
I'm to the woods
Lonliness wraps me in a blanket
But I feel cold and sad
So cold and sad

I walk on
I'm confused
I don't know what to do
I clear the woods
White bleakness engulfs me

I stop
A figure walks toward me
He reaches for my hand
I hesitate
Uncertain of what to do

I reach out
I take his hand
And comfort arises from within
I see his face
He looks lovingly into mine

I fall to the ground
My eyes weep with shame
The man bends down and holds me tight
He cries with me
And my tears dry up

I hold onto him
I don't want to let go
I want to stay with him
I tell him
And he says I can

I stand
I hold his hand
My pain ebbing away as his love settles in
The mist and fog go away
The sky is clear blue with a sun

I smile
I see all my friends
Those who had been trying to reach out to me
They smile and rejoice
I look back to the man

I walk with him
He talks to me
And I smile with joy
I follow the path to his home
As Jesus leads me there


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  • User Comments: [1]
    Wow. . .I love this poem! It's excellent! You're really good at writing those.

    comment Nienna39 · Community Member · Fri Aug 25, 2006 @ 06:29am
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