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Screwed Up FairyTale
Kindly Kings, softly queens, blushing princesses`, charming princes along with a peace filled town...I think its time to close that fairytale for in this tale there is no such thing as a happy ending
Chapter 4
Finally I updated! Sorry that I didn't A LOT sooner >>;
But only the beginning of Chapt.4, will add the rest later ;]


It was starting to get dark and for the first time is so many years An'ya felt a sort of relief as she headed towards her, yes her, room. Up until this point she didn't have a room to herself, it was always with whomever had lusted for her that night. Yet here she went to enjoy a night all alone. The best news though was that Hiryuu had kept his word, that was why she was getting her own room. She was estatic.

She had just left the small lunch(dinner, breakfest whatever the occasion) hall that was reserved for slaves and servants to get her ration of bread and cheese. Sometimes when they were lucky they got soup that could actually be considered soup. Not watery goo with a meager slice of half stale bread. Granted she usually got more food than everyone else because of her job. Who wants to do a skeleton? Seriously.

An'ya let out a small sigh as she entered her room. It was a small room at best but, again, it was hers. The walls were bare, the floor was stone with a small tattered rug for relief, and her bed...breath taking. It was plain but she could tell by the covers that it was soft, comfortable. She almost forgot the reason behind it. There was also a dresser so she figured that should be her first stop but before she even took a step her door burst open.

"An'ya!"

An'ya whipped around, "Fuu? Whats going on?"


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  • User Comments: [2]
    I like it 3nodding I'm waiting to see what Fuu has to say and how An'ya reacts, I'm excited to see the relationship between them.

    There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, and some more detail and attention to adding more of a concrete setting would be great. I like how the characters are becoming more real for the readers. Keep adding to them!

    KEEP WRITING, DAMMIT. @_@


    comment Zekoyah · Community Member · Tue Aug 12, 2008 @ 12:31pm
    omg, it's so interesting. Really good, no spelling mistakes as far as I could see.



    Please continue writing more!!!


    comment Artemis_115 · Community Member · Thu Dec 24, 2009 @ 12:34am
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