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The Phantom of box 5 presents:
Poetry of hope,love,lust,forlorn, and the fallen.This is my poetry which I wrote and maby if I get enough comments I'll put my stories up as well. Though be warned they are unedited for i don't have enough time. Those of you who wish to comment I th
The fallen's Eden (Full English)
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The fallen's Eden (Full English)

How has thee fallen?
drowning the world...
a furious dance...
Like the rain in abundance
Falling towards the earth in wealth
Thou has thane eyes perched up at the heavens above
Casting wrath upon mankind
rising above lucifer in your quest...
For the sin of thy god

(Chorus)
a hole to crown me...
Ominous heart thy tears departs
Ye old flower drooped upon the sword and the bow
Black as thoust raven eyes and heart
a hole to crown me...
Darkness in all its empty forms
Ye brow wrinkled as time in malice
And warped as thoust refection be
There is no god


Angry as the tide,fallen from grace
though thy feathered wings are broken
sweeping away the once proud and sturdy mountains
See how they crumble as your fury collides with the worlds
God’s world thus it doth crash violently
Ye body is wrapped Lassoed and chained into place
Into existence by thy soul and tendered flesh
This is now your Luciferious Eden
Weep here or nevermore
Try not to cry as your hate fades into blackness
It shows, oh how it shows

(Chorus)
a abyss to crown me...
Ominous heart thy tears departs
Ye old flower drooped upon the sword and the bow
Black as thoust raven eyes and heart
a abyss to crown me...
blackness in all its empty form
Ye brow wrinkled as time in malice
And contorted as thoust reflection be
god is dead

Horned god thou thinkest
Finding a way to dominate, to destroy
Your formerly white wings shattered and shredded
Here your maelstrom is true
Your murmured lips pulled away in grief
your once soulful eyes now scream!
Truest is thy form in the hearts and minds of mankind
Mankind whom chose to ignore the light
Like Adam and eve choose to ignore thou warnings
Dead now is their adored Eden

(Chorus)
a void to crown me...
Ominous heart thy tears departs
Ye old flower drooped upon the sword and the bow
Black as thoust raven eyes and heart
a void to crown me...
shade in all its empty form
Ye brow wrinkled as time in malice
And marring as thoust reflection be...
There is no god

Spoken:
god spoke to you
he said heaven or hell?
heaven or hell?
You replied neither...
and then....
you fell...

Once was your skin white
and luminescent with god’s hollowed light
Now thy beauty lay before thee
Disfigured, bleeding thy body speakled crimson and red contorted
Thy chains that shall ceaselessly caress thee
Will clutch you in anguish where you shall weep no more
These hooks wrap and hold you by thy flesh
And the raven thy plutonian evil shall keep you
Ask as you may forever …
Nevermore said the plutonian raven tenderly
thoust never more shall you see heaven
And nevermore shall it be so…

Spoken:
The search for thy way to Paradise is eternal...
But maybe it is that quest that shall close the gates of the Heavens...
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Author notes

sos In the latin version.This is what it says in english.just for those people who don't want to translate.Took the last spoken part from some guy on youtube.
Readers I am once again editing this piece and amazingly enough i need your help! I was thinking of deleting a part of this poem the part of the poem that I think needs to go is: "god spoke to you
he said heaven or hell?heaven or hell?You replied neither...and then.... you fell..." tell me do you think it is worthy of existance? Or doomed to be distroyed and never remembered? Tell me in your comments!!!

~OG


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You spoke of a place where,we could walk free,
you promised me hope beyond my wildest dreams.
SO open your eyes anndd you'll see,
coommee...take my hand and,my word,my wisdom annd follow me!
~braindance

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