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Star-Twilight
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This is a poem I call "Rain"
"Rain"

Here it comes
the only thing that
clenses my soul
I feel realive
when the cool water
soaks into my clothes
clings to my body
and soaks through my skin
for some reason
or another
my sences seem
to become highten
my hearing
my eye sight
my touch
all of them
gentle yet sharp
It renews me
makes me happy
when i'm sad
then i feel sleep
overcome me
and i pray
when i wake up
I'll be a new person





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killswitch717
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comment Commented on: Sat Jun 04, 2005 @ 07:24pm
its so gentle and touching. it shows that ur a confident and happy person and i respect that in a girl.


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