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Dreamsinger's Journal
Just writing down whatever I feel like writing down, no big deal.
"Fool"
I'm a fool, I know it's true
I'm a fool who's in love with you
Don't you dare shy away from me
Please, for my sanity, don't close up your ears
It's driving me crazy
Seeing you all the time
I know I shouldn't tell you
But you're who I see when I close my eyes
I'm tired and saddened
I'm sure you'll never be mine
So please give me my heart
Release it from you hold
'Cause I kills me so to think
Of you holding another girl tight
I'll never forget that fateful night
I thought I was over you
My heard bound in stone
And then I saw you
And my heart wasn't cold
But I shook it off
Tried to forget
But your smile wore me down
And I was falling again
You're my first love
But I'll never let you know
Only a precious few have I ever told
Many may have guessed but they figured I was done
And then you had to go and make my heart run
I'll never fogive you
I feel insane
Can you stop haunting me?
Can you leave my dreams in peace?
'Cause 'though I try and pretend
And don't say I've fallen again
My dreams are proof
That I truly am in love with you
And I know I'm still young
And I hope it passes through
Because my heart hurts to bad
I feel like I'm dieing
Because it's not true
You'll never feel it too
And I'm a fool to think it
But I still wanna believe it
Yet whenever he mentions
You and her
My heart skips a beat
And I remind myself to keep breathing
I was hoping tha maybe you could see me that way
Even though I realize I was young and my hopes vain
So please stop leading me
Give me back my heart
And we'll part our seperate ways
And I'll try to to look back
Please don't feel sorry
I know it's hopeless
But I can't stop you from haunting
My everliving dream
But hopefully soon you'll stop appearing
And I can start forgiving
Myself for a being a fool
Don't you dare be sorry
I'm the one who fell for you.



It's not one of my best but I guess it'll work for now until I find some of my better ones. I wrote this one on 8/13/07 at about 2 in the morning. Feel free to comment or critique, I can't get any better without feedback!

~Dream


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  • User Comments: [2]
    That brought a tear to my eye. It was excellent, depressing but very well written.

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    comment rowlrumon · Community Member · Tue Jul 14, 2009 @ 04:30am
    WOOT WOOT first one to post! And the crowd goes wild!

    comment rowlrumon · Community Member · Tue Jul 14, 2009 @ 04:36am
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