My Beating Heart

• Artist: Jade Neko Kai
• Description: I wrote this after my bf cheated on me
• Date: 02/15/2010
• Tags: beating heart

I saw my heart beating in the palm of her hand
As I slowly fell to the clod ground
I thought I heard him say I still love you
But my dying heart could not hear him say these words
Only silence was heard that day
I lie upon the ground bathed within my blood
I heard her say now your free
But how could he be free
In order to free he would first have to be imprisoned
I remember the last thing I heard him say
I didn't do it because I love her
I did it because I love you
My tears instantly turned to diamonds
Diamonds of blood and broken love

Comments

[Stuffy Panda]

Wow, Great advice Suki, and also the poem is amazing while it may be based off a sad subject, it's still good take it well cheaters are pathetic men/women who are unfaithful.

[kera suki]

The poem was nice. Don't let one bad apple ruen everything. My grandmother once said,"when you leave someone don't ever go back to him-as what ever caused you to break up, will only be worse if you get back together. Never sell yourself short. The right guy will come along.