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Charcoal2.0 =3
Just crap. X3
A poem I made.
When old blood drys
And new blood falls

Apocolyps comes
And darkness calls

And there you shall With a death heavy soul

The dead eyes they stare
The hearts made of coal

On the wings of a raven
And a scream in the night

An ocean of blood
And no will to fight

And the silence is tormenting
So you'll go insane

And the slice of the silver
And red crimson pain

The beautiful mame
And the tears made of blood

The crys made of shame
Find nothing in love

The horendes exquisit
The dead star of wish

The lonsum self hatered
The death of a kiss

The light it so burns
The shreek out of hate

The disturbance of pleasure
The unchangable fate

No sence in your meaning
No sence in your feeling

The roughness of rose peatles
The soft of a killing

The light that once shown
Has now faded away

No comfort no sanctuary
In the killing of day.

Tada!!! Hope you like it. I know I spelled some things wrong but who the ******** cares?


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  • User Comments: [2]
    -claps-that was great hun! i loved it!!!!! blaugh ill post a few of mine sumtime and let u kno when i do

    comment Angel_Of_Music_N_Darkness · Community Member · Sat Feb 19, 2005 @ 06:40am
    Thanks. I'll comment on yours for sure.

    comment Charcoal2.0 · Community Member · Sat Feb 19, 2005 @ 06:43am
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