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...just shut up ...
Drowning
The water pushes me down
I am starting to drown
my life passes before my eyes
showing all the tears I've cried
there's no use going up for a last breath
cause soon my body will be put to rest
to the water I am bound
and I continue to drown
the water blurs my eyesight
as I no longer fight
I remember my time with you
and all that we went through
drowning decreases lifes pain
and I no longer feel vain
the water fills my lungs
and into the water you lunge
but you can no longer save me
the darkness is all I see
though my lungs still bleed
my drowning has set me free


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  • User Comments: [1]
    razz ....Wow.. Thats a good poem.. But my question is what are you drowning in.. And why are writeing a poem like this.. It's very un-zaylaish..

    comment kotaru saishen · Community Member · Fri Dec 08, 2006 @ 06:30am
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