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poems 'n such(woot^^)
walls are the things that hold me back
its no longer a thing of my imagination
there is a wall where ever i turn
solid and cold
this wall keeps people out
people i desperately want to love
this wall keeps me to myself
a lock-down on my emotions
it surrounds me as if keeping me hostage from the rest of the earth
i try to break it
i pound and pound
i try to yell
but it seems no one is there to hear me
so i sit alone in my private jail
surrounded by walls of cold stone
and i wait for the one who breaks down my walls
and sets my injured heart free
and when he comes;who ever he is
i hope he carries me away
far far away from this place which i have grown to be part of
my home is a place of heat ache
my world a place of hurt
and all i want now is to be released and for that special some one to be my escape
i do not hate life
i do not want to end
i simply want to fly away
and become part of something better
a place with out walls
and with out boundaries
to be able to see every thing and every one for miles around
and to never ever be under the influence of bottled up emotions ever again


will you be my escape from these walls that hold me hostage?


lilly_child_RP
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  • User Comments: [8]
    This poem is so mysterious...its COOL!!! WOW!!! biggrin xd smile surprised
    But I think I heard something so similar before...nvm but still.
    its cool. If this is not the reaction you expected then I'm sorry. T.T

    comment SUUUUSHI101 · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 01:34pm
    This is awesome. biggrin

    Its always fun to read your poems.

    comment Mokushi000 · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 02:15pm
    jeez how do u think of all of these ideas??? i wouldnt be able to....i cant write poems lol gonk

    comment brieZOMBIE · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 02:55pm
    yo is this the next William Shakespeare i smell over here?

    comment jrocketc0 · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 08:53pm
    i didnt read it but im sure its geart 3nodding

    comment XxTwin_bladeXx · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 09:02pm
    I've seen a lot of similar ones. Since I'm in a band we write lyrics like that sometimes except most of them aren't like that. We're more like you don't even notice me or the guy likes girl, girl is too popular and ignores guy and other emo stuff in a sense.

    comment AHeartInSolitude · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 09:52pm
    well to explain my self
    i was in the car on the free way and they are building 8 new walls
    i hate walls they are ugly
    so i decided to write about walls
    this is just how it turnd out

    comment lilly_child_RP · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 11:46pm
    nice i have 1 kinda simular called silence its bout pushin bonderes 2 and feelin traped check out my journal 4 poetry and polls

    comment sexylilpixie1234 · Community Member · Thu Dec 07, 2006 @ 03:59am
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