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A Repetitive claustrophobic Poem
I can't breath anymore
people breathing way to close
the room begins to spin
people breathing way to close
pushing closer,the walls close in
people breathing way to close
the stench of a thousand bodies smothers me
people breathing way to close
my heart races,its going to burst
people breathing way to close
i try to scream,try to yell
people breathing way to close
i hear your voice
people fade,we are alone
your figure shows in the shadows
people fade,we are alone
I walk to you,you walk to me
my savior,my escape
I take a breath,i am alive
my savior my escape
and then...
life goes on


lilly_child_RP
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  • User Comments: [5]
    God, I LOVE IT!

    It ******** explains my claustrophobia so well....and how clinging to Geoff makes it all go away... o_O

    BEAUTIFULLY DONE!

    comment ArchivedCC · Community Member · Tue Nov 14, 2006 @ 02:37am
    lol thanks chabo

    comment lilly_child_RP · Community Member · Tue Nov 14, 2006 @ 04:51am
    3 words...... oh my god......^^ nice i love it^_^

    comment [~blood-stained-havok~] · Community Member · Tue Nov 14, 2006 @ 11:21pm
    ^^yay ty blood*hugs*

    comment lilly_child_RP · Community Member · Wed Nov 15, 2006 @ 02:23am
    big font scare jento!!!!*hides* ninja

    comment XxTwin_bladeXx · Community Member · Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 03:30am
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