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Arie Anna
ehh..just stuff I feel like writing down.
OK! INTRO to short story-ness!! (not a journal entry)
Messiah


Once upon a time in this land, there was bountiful food, clean water, wonderous rulers, and the word of love. It's too bad that time has been and gone. Food is scarce from the extreme size of population, clean water is long since forgotten, the rulers of what used to be called "countries" are now just people who claim to make differences in the land for the "greater good". The ozone has rotted, and so our annhilation is near. The polar icecaps have begun to melt and so now each year, we lose about twelve inches of land to the ocean. Our world is currupted and collapsing. Religion has grown to be but a small, secluded group of people who were the sons, daughters, and grandchildren of priests and other nobleman of the church. No one was allowed to enter the city which we called Hack, for if someone was caught trying to come over the walls, soldiers would escort him out of the city, and hack off each of his limbs say for his head and leave him to die. There was only one other well-preserved "town". It was a huge building that contained over four-thousand people. It used to be a building for some sort of industry with a dream of creating ultimate humans. They would take in "freaks" and give them somewhere to stay. There was only a small fee for it though. The scientists needed the DNA of freaks with desirable traits in order to create walking, talking bio-weapons to use on their enemies. I, Seraphinm, though only sixteen when all of this was taking place, knew that something was very wrong with the world we lived in. I also knew that somehow, I was going to make a difference. Little did I know, the destiny laid out for me was far greater than what I had had in mind.


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  • User Comments: [4]
    O_o Wow. That's really really good! I knew you'd be good at it! That's awesome. It makes me want to read more. xd I cant wait till you write more and put it on here. 3nodding

    comment AkureiKnight · Community Member · Sun Jan 16, 2005 @ 04:50pm
    Oh. Thanks. redface smile I'm not that great. I just sorta wanted to make sure whoever read it would have an idea of the scenery and stuff. ^_^ I'll probably post another piece of it sometime this week. 3nodding

    comment Arie Anna · Community Member · Sun Jan 16, 2005 @ 05:31pm
    aww you are too good. If I was writing that, it wouldn't be so good sweatdrop whee I think it's good and Im sure the other parts of this story is gonna be even better 3nodding heart

    comment AkureiKnight · Community Member · Sun Jan 16, 2005 @ 05:46pm
    Hehe. Thanks. ^_^ I'm gonna try to make it good.

    comment Arie Anna · Community Member · Sun Jan 16, 2005 @ 05:48pm
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