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poems i write

	i look
	i look


its hard to think, i look around and my friends are gone.... i remember when we signed up, boy was that stupid.... i look at them one last time, before they go and die.... i think why do i live ? i hold my friends as they die, i hold my tears back so i look tough.... guns shootin, bombs goin off, and people diein.... i hold my head up as i kill the other people.... i think this ain't right....why am i here ? i look at my friends one last time, before they go and die.... a bullet shot, i go down... i look at the other people around... i close my eyes and die nowin i tried... by : ferrin m. heidt (( me )) vampire_queen1990 · Fri Dec 03, 2004 @ 11:24pm · 10 Comments


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	oh wow thats kind of sad Offline Kar Kar-chan · Community Member · Fri Dec 03, 2004 @ 11:30pm


	got bored durin history... xp Offline vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Fri Dec 03, 2004 @ 11:31pm


	yeah its not as good as some of your other stuff but better than most of mine Offline Blood_Black_Thorn_Rose · Community Member · Tue Dec 07, 2004 @ 12:08am


	oh well...i thinkin of givein poetry up... Offline vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Tue Dec 07, 2004 @ 12:13am


	It is a decent poem, but you need a little bit more feeling..looks around wait did I say that of all people. I meant it stinks yeah Umm that is what I ment. Looks around nervously again Offline Nathsazar TPC · Community Member · Tue Dec 07, 2004 @ 04:11am


	thanxs...i won't tell anyone you liked it... xp Offline vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Tue Dec 07, 2004 @ 03:09pm


	its great but it has less feeling liek he said but hey dont give it up all round i like hearing it Offline Blood_Black_Thorn_Rose · Community Member · Wed Dec 08, 2004 @ 01:17am


	i can't think straight.... crying Offline vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Wed Dec 08, 2004 @ 11:51pm


	join the party i cant think straight either crying Offline Blood_Black_Thorn_Rose · Community Member · Fri Dec 10, 2004 @ 11:24pm


	by brain is fried.... Offline vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Fri Dec 10, 2004 @ 11:35pm

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