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Does this rag smell like chloroform to you?
A trip across the dimentional rift of time and space, falling through shattered dreams and ancient languages long forgotten.
Testing out my German here.
I'm writing my "about me" section here, only in German. Just a test because I want to be hopefully almost fluent in the next four years. [it won't be easy... sweatdrop ] Somebody tell me what I got wrong?
Hallo, ich heisst Lena :3
Ich sprechen einige Deutsch und voll Englisch.
Ich bin homeschooled.
Ich liebe meine Freund Khristian und meine Freundin Khasey und Devan.
That's about all the full sentences I know that are written on my profile...I feel so sad now.


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  • User Comments: [2]
    I'm just wondering how I even got here o.O
    Anyway, trying to help you:
    1. originally: Hallo, ich heisst Lena :3
    new: Hallo, ich heisse Lena :3
    2. originally: Ich sprechen einige Deutsch und voll Englisch.
    new: Ich sprechen ein bisschen/wenig Deutsch und fließend Englisch.
    ein bisschen/ein wenig => a little/a bit
    fließend => fluently
    3. originally: Ich liebe meine Freund Khristian und meine Freundin Khasey und Devan.
    new: Ich liebe meine Freunde Khristian, Khasey und Devan.
    or: Ich liebe meinen Freund Khristian und meine Freundinnen Khasey und Devan
    although that sounds like Khristian is your boyfriend, if he is however it makes sense to put it this way wink
    allright then, if you have any questions(or feel like yelling at me for correcting the mistakes gonk ) feel free to contact me :3
    I sound like I'm desperate for attention, no? xD

    comment Carmarthen · Community Member · Tue Jun 30, 2009 @ 06:45pm
    Oh, German is so hard to learn XD But you do very well, keep that up :3
    Seems you have some Problems with the personal Pronouns, it should be "meinen Freund" and if you want to name both of your other friends, "meine Freunde" (Plural)
    But thats quiet hard to learn and your sentences are very good smile
    So heres a german greet :
    Hallo!
    Viele Grüße aus Deutschland. Dein Deutsch ist schon sehr gut, lerne weiter so fleißig!
    Liebe Grüße
    Shoki

    comment XXXXdeletedXXXX · Community Member · Wed Jul 01, 2009 @ 05:49pm
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