Quite simply put, I'm arrogant, There's no softer way around. Bear with me as I give my rant, Of people around me surround.
Your comma splices make me shiver, Oh, wait, who knows what that is? Bad grammar you often deliver, And when there's no good rhyme for 'is' you just keep typing because it makes it sound less like you just failed at making a single rhyme, and more like you meant to do that.
Read this; "Hopefully, you'll recall To feed the cows." But... do you know What semantics say you said? (Oops, I just went out of the rhyme pattern, but it doesn't matter because this is basic high school poetry at is worst. Oh, need a rhyme: snow.)
Right, I forgot to add what semantics said you said. Read this, "With hope, you'll remember to feel the cows." Damn those semantics. 'cause that's what the up-a few-lines sentence means. Uhm, new rhyme. Arouse. (Scandalous)
I should probably be getting back into the rant. But it's much to much fun to screw myself over. I'm trying, though, but I can't. Did you know there's no rhyme for purple? Moreover.
Pity; is your muse weary? For my eyes are more tired still. Frankly, I find it quite dreary, Expectations you fail to fulfill.
Sygl · Sun May 17, 2009 @ 03:32am · 0 Comments |