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poems i write
two girls
i sit in a car....
its so dark i can't see....
where could i be ?
a woman yellin and a young girl wailing.. scream gonk
i sit her quietly...
i feel around and touch someone... ninja
i ask whats happenin?
she tells me we have been kidnapped...
i reach for my phone but its in two.... sweatdrop
the car comes to a scretchin hult....
my head bashes against a metal bar...
blood gushes from my head....
i close my eyes and die... whee
the drive goes to jail and two grils graves are dug...
for two poor girls who never got to live there lives...
by : ferrin m. heidt (me)


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  • User Comments: [5]
    thats kind of sad

    comment Kar Kar-chan · Community Member · Wed Nov 10, 2004 @ 04:46am
    its amazeing how you come up wiht these poems i love them all

    comment Blood_Black_Thorn_Rose · Community Member · Thu Nov 11, 2004 @ 03:16am
    i put real things into poems thats how...

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Thu Nov 11, 2004 @ 03:18am
    same here if you look at the right ones but its sad life weve both lived so it seems

    comment Blood_Black_Thorn_Rose · Community Member · Thu Nov 11, 2004 @ 04:36am
    i learn to live with it

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Thu Nov 11, 2004 @ 04:40am
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