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poems i write
oh now i remember
I put that knife somewhere,
oh now i remember,
Its by the one i stole from you.
I thought i had forgotten.
Oh now i remember,
I need it once more.
To cut deeper then all the others.
and if i should die,
pleaze don't cry.
Oh now i remember,
its your fault i need it.
promises come and go,
love comes once or twice,
so i rolled the dice,
and it said not you.
that broke my heart in two....
Oh now i remember,
you promised you wouldn't,
but here i am,
once again alone and cold.
Oh now i remember,
you've forgotten who i am.
you've forgotten how much i love you,
oh now i remember,
you lied....

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vampire_queen1990
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  • User Comments: [20]
    crying thats so sad but it a good poem too gonk *sniffs*

    comment Nashira_San · Community Member · Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 10:47pm
    " Thanks. To bad thats how i feel. "

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 10:50pm
    dar, sad, depressing and let so very true, keep up the good work, and also i hope that things get better.

    comment Kira_Kabuki · Community Member · Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 11:02pm
    Thanks so do i...

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 11:06pm
    Great Poem. So true...

    comment Lost-Ninja · Community Member · Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 11:40pm
    Thanks i know

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sat Aug 13, 2005 @ 11:41pm
    it was really good.

    comment Faustus63 · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 12:11am
    thanks whee

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 12:21am
    To do with that guy you told me about? Otherwise, I think its saying all over again, what you told me... sweatdrop But its good... wink Keep it up.

    comment Dell19930 · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 12:48am
    that is very good.

    comment Amie Lucero · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 12:49am
    *huggles tightly, crying* you write the best poems ever Ferr...

    comment KittytheKat · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 01:43am
    " thank you guys. I told myself i wouldn't write any more but i had to write one more. "

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 03:03am
    wow...well honney I am here for you!!!

    comment Fat_Tony · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 03:06am
    Gah. I like that peom alot. it's sorta like how I write. >< Even though it's sad, it's still very pretty.

    comment Katsuku · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 03:53am
    This one is great. I hope you feel better soon. sweatdrop

    comment Severus_Golden_Angel · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 03:55am
    Thanks everyone.

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 05:46am
    beautiful im a poet too sweetie

    comment The Devils Aphrodite · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 09:33am
    cool

    comment vampire_queen1990 · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 09:58am
    its a bit gloomy but still one of the best i read

    comment Project_X · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 12:03pm
    nice poem dark ^_^
    really suits the mood
    keep up the great work!!


    comment Kamania · Community Member · Sun Aug 14, 2005 @ 12:19pm
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