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ok this is a continuation (sp?) of my last journal entry, I was in the middle of typing a battle that takes place in the story I'm writing, so if ur intrested, click on the entry right before this one to start from the beginning...ok well heres more of the fight...

It's head pushed throught the air, closing the distance between us at frightening pace. I tried to look around, to grasp my sorroundings and think up a plan, but the wind rushing by me made it unbareably hard to keep my eyes open, or even squint. My eyeballs felt dry and achy.
The I felt the change in dirrection, I was falling now, everything moved so fast. My back hit the snake's nose and I fell into its slimy mouth. I knew I had to act fast, before the snake closed it's mouth. I focused my energy into my feet, and rushed for towards the front of it's closing mouth. I slid out, tearing a bit of my skirt on it's sharp fang. I reached up, gripping into the snake's nostral. Before the snake could fully close it's mouth and crush my foot still inbetween it's teeth, I slung myself up back onto it's slick head. This time I didn't waste a second, my fist glowed white with my special energy, and I punched with all my might into the thick skull of the snake. The snake flung it's head wildly, flinging me off.
I slammed into the floor with a hard smack. Pain surged through my body. Imobalizing me for several minutes. I heard the snake hissing and recklessly waving it's head for several mintues as I recovered. Then I heard a thump and things went quiet. I knew without a doubt the snake was down for good.

and ok, I'm gonna stop there for now cause I'm tired of writing now lolz, the ending got less detailed becaue my brains failing me. XP but yeah, plz tell me what you think, I know it probably sucked lolz, i think I give myself too much credit when I brag about this story. but yeah, I would love to hear what you ppl think of it, even if its critisism, I can handle it! so plz tell me what you think!