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Round About (poem)
sweet cherry blossoms
on the wind
the nightingale's song
never ends
the hills rolling
like the ocean waves
the ocean creates
seagalley caves
the caves entrance
open wide
like a lions mouth
with teeth inside
the teeth sharp
pointing up and down
making the image
of buildings down town
buildings in town
are always rebuilt
like an unbloomed flower
doesn't have the chance to wilt
the wilting's prevented
by a babe's gentle pick
out of mommy's garden
which makes her tick
the ticking represents
time measurements in a clock
even without the clock
time never stops
this time will never stop
just like my love for you
which is so pure
and sweet and true
sweet like the cherry blossoms
on the tree limbs
and the nightingale's song
that never ends


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  • User Comments: [3]
    Meh. As all your poems are, (is too lazy to comment all of the ones you posted), they're good, 'Amy.'

    comment Lonesome_wolf_child · Community Member · Tue Jul 12, 2005 @ 06:56pm
    Tsk! Tsk!

    comment heavymetalsk8er · Community Member · Fri Jul 22, 2005 @ 10:52pm
    Meh. ^^ I know. xd

    comment Lonesome_wolf_child · Community Member · Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 04:09am
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