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mindless orientations I think the title speaks for itself.


musicwhore
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OK, here's that poem I promised ya'll. Sorry, but I really can't write [good] poetry. sweatdrop

Musings Between God and Man
Great Babylon
will fall -

Sin will be its demise
lack of morality and common sense
brought on by feigned intelligence.
Predestination.
Tightly pulled strings
and I am the puppeteer.
Great Babylon
will fall -


So if the writer was predestined to write,
then the beginning was meant to end.
There is no such thing as
"the meaning of life."
There is no purpose to meager living
and I have no reason to write...
Great Babylon
will fall -

There is no glory
in suicide.


But I see no such fame residing in life.
Please, tell me the purpose fo living
and I'll hand you my heart on a silver platter.
"Would you like some tea with that sugar?"
Your words are sweet and few,
but like sugar-coated pills,
there is no true effect.
And those brainwashed drones
will take your spoonful of sugar
and let the medicine go down.

Great Babylon
will fall -
You forgot to pay the pied piper
and now the rats are coming
to defile the city.
"What comes around..."


Does not come back
in your sickly twisted world
of false truths
and ignorance.
[You never get what's coming for you]
SO if you don't mind,
I'll take my medicine and my karma,
and ask for nothing.
Except for a gun
with a single bullet.
Great Babylon
will fall -





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GCD Elf 789
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 01, 2005 @ 12:31am
AHHH!!! I love it, but you're talking about suicide again. *glare* I know, I know, I do the same thing too, so I forgive you. Overall I love it, with the exception of the few spelling errors. I like how you used cliches and quotes to enhance the sense of the real world's demise. The only thing I really hated was how you used the word "sugar" three times in a matter of about 6 lines. Try to make it so that some synonyms would work next time. And there's my duty as editing b***h for the day. *bows* To all a good night... lol


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