Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

setting: xemnas' office. a des in the middle with a bunch of pappers on it and a black box. two chirs in front of it.

vexen-[ knocks on office door] Superior? it's me
xemnas- [looks up from work] come in Vexen.
vexen- [ walks into office and sits on the right chair] it's about the new recruit for...[ looks around to make sure no one is around] the experiment. is it ready?
xemnas- [ smirks] yes. i'm on my way to pick it up now. here is the replacement part.[ shoves box to VEXEN] take good car of it please.
vexen- [nods and takes box into arms] yes sir.[ gets up to leave but turns around] for our sake, i hope this test subject you found was stronger then the last one... we're running out of supplies to make the replica hearts.
xemnas- [nod] trust me Vexen, this one is strong, i could sense it.
vexen- i hope you're right Superior. [ looks down at box] i added something different to this one... it might work alittle better. it hightens the receptors for the memories and emotins we added.
xemnas- [ looks up] really? that's actually a good idea Vexen, keep up the good work.
vexen- thank you sir. well, i'm off the prepare. the test subject needs to be unharmed physically to make this work... make sure it's safe
xemnas-[ chuckles] oh, it's safe from harm, don' t worry about that...

[ vexen exits the stage and all lights go off. end of scene]

how was that? i liked it, even though it ended diffrently then wen i wrote it the first time... anywho, more to come